Only One Place

I call to you, but you do not know
For these are just well kept thoughts
Nourished by my heart, in my mind
Visions of embraces, laughter and love
No thread holding us together, we are one
Connected by something we didn’t create
Yet from this unison, we create more
Bright as the meteor showers in the sky
No need to wish upon fast falling stars
The wishes have already come true for us
Words are spoken in gestures undeniable
Truth configures the trust that we share
I know you will hear me, because I rest
In only one special place, you can find me

Heidi Sands

6/21/20
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 7/3/2020 6:00:00 AM
Thank goodness we each can retain our own thoughts throughout whatever we endure.
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Date: 7/3/2020 10:47:00 AM
Thank you Caren! Your comments have really made my day special :)
Date: 6/26/2020 2:10:00 PM
That's a connect hard to explain with words...other than, it's a soul thing...purely natural...I like it
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Date: 6/26/2020 2:19:00 PM
I am happy you like it. Thank you for your kind commemts :)
Date: 6/25/2020 1:50:00 PM
Oh dear.. What a lovely piece you have here. Your craft is definitely seasoned with lots of creativity. Great poem.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/25/2020 1:55:00 PM
Thank you so much Funom. I appreciate your support. It is nice to see your kind comment today :)
Date: 6/23/2020 8:58:00 AM
A fine lovely muse and im wondering who it is addressed to, a person or... I liked the meteor line, bright shine!! Kudos. ............... ..............Plz pleez do read and comment my newest piece, a prose and do also read the articles and data I have copy pasted in comment section below the poem so you will confirm the matter further.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/23/2020 7:35:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and comment today. Ok. I hope you have a nice evening :)
Date: 6/22/2020 10:22:00 PM
Very nice Heidi! I really enjoyed this one.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/23/2020 8:08:00 AM
Thank you Timothy. I am happy to hear you enjoyed this. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 6/22/2020 7:15:00 PM
Sweet, sweet, lovely thoughts, my friend. So delicately presented. :) Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/22/2020 7:38:00 PM
Thank you , thank you Gershon. Goodnight :)
Date: 6/22/2020 4:09:00 PM
Our thoughts are our most sacred place and can never be stolen or destroyed, only by disease. This is beautiful Heidi. Have a great week. Blessings xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/22/2020 4:11:00 PM
Thank you for such a kind and understanding comment Connie. I appreciate your support. I hope you have a nice week too. Blessings :)
Date: 6/22/2020 10:57:00 AM
That special place speaks eloquently in your verse--well done, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/22/2020 10:59:00 AM
Thank you Vijay. I always appreciate your support. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 6/22/2020 8:20:00 AM
words spoken in gestures...especially from the eyes Heidi..the Truth doesindeed configure truth..wisewords.Stay creative.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/22/2020 8:59:00 AM
Yes. Thank you Brian. I appreciate your visit and encouragement today. In these difficult times here, it has been a challenge to keep my muse going. I hope you have a nice day and all is well :)
Date: 6/22/2020 7:22:00 AM
Tenderly romantic verse dearest, Heidi! Much enjoyed it! Hugs xxx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/22/2020 8:07:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios. I am able to see comments for now today and I am happy you enjoyed this :)
Date: 6/22/2020 1:08:00 AM
lovely and sweet verse Heidi.. I know you will hear me, because I rest.. In only one special place, you can find me..Beautifully penned..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/22/2020 8:06:00 AM
Thank you Jenish! I appreciate your kind comment today :)
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