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Only One Day

Imagine if you could visit Heaven for only one day... Who would you search for, and what would you say? Can you envision the beauty beyond its streets of gold? Would it be as glorious as in the Bible it's been foretold? Would you search for your dearly deceased loved ones, mothers, fathers, brothers, daughters and sons? Would you wish to remain with them in such a divine place? Would you fall to your knees if you saw God’s face? Imagine such an Elysian paradise without violence or hate, where everyone is blessedly content, and no one is irate. Visualize greeting your grandparents as they were in youth. Can you conceive a realm where no lies are told; only truth? If a visit I could make, I'd thank God for such an amazing gift. Then sit upon a fluffy cloud, looking around as I slowly drift. I would hold my Mother's hand and probably beg to stay. Can you imagine visiting Heaven, even if for only one day? January 22nd, 2021 Can You Imagine-Any Form Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 1/29/2021 1:36:00 PM
Mark, congratulations on your win in my Can You Imagine contest with this excellent poem, I love it _Constance
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Mark Koplin
Date: 1/31/2021 3:01:00 PM
Thanks Constance, I appreciate your generous placement!
Date: 1/29/2021 5:35:00 AM
Superb write, Mark! Love reigns supreme! Congrats on your win!
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Mark Koplin
Date: 1/31/2021 3:01:00 PM
Thank you!
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Mark Koplin
Date: 1/31/2021 3:01:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 1/23/2021 4:10:00 AM
"Who would you search for, and what would you say?" I would want to hold my mother's hand too! Wow! I am glad your muse conjured up this one. Thank you!
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Mark Koplin
Date: 1/23/2021 8:21:00 AM
I'm glad you liked it, Thanks Caren!
Date: 1/22/2021 8:03:00 AM
Look forward to the day when I get a one way ticket to there. But hopefully not too soon. Enjoy your weekend Mark. Tom
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Mark Koplin
Date: 1/22/2021 12:50:00 PM
Hopefully it's a ways off yet. Thanks Tom and have a great weekend as well!
Date: 1/22/2021 6:54:00 AM
beautifully penned mark and a thought provoking piece, would love to meet my maternal grandma and a few other folk I never got the chance to meet:-) hugs jan xx
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Mark Koplin
Date: 1/22/2021 12:49:00 PM
I appreciate that Jan, Thank you! I have a brother I never met.

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