Only Once

Darkness laid around us like a blanket
Consuming us in its womb
She was crying
I was quiet

Crickets chirped softly in the distance

Her face was buried in my chest
She was shaking like a small child
I felt numb
She was sorry

The moon looked down upon us

I thought it would be different
I thought I would be empowered
She thought it would be different
She thought she would be free

I rolled her softly over
I sat up to view the night
She curled up in a ball
Still wriggling with remorse

Patting her on the shoulder
I lit a cigarette
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Ginn Avatar
March 12, 2009 at 6:10 PM
Such raw emotion, perfectly written. Okay so now you are one of my favorite poets.
N. Avatar
November 13, 2008 at 12:19 AM
WOW...
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September 23, 2008 at 1:21 PM
Such a sad yet heartfelt reflection. Nice use of imagery to forward your thoughts. I see you haven't been at Poetry Soup for very long. A belated welcome to you. I hope you are enjoying your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
Winter Avatar
September 6, 2008 at 8:13 AM
You have portrayed deep regret in a relationship. Emotional, well expressed, to say the least. Felt like I was watching a scene from a movie. Just wow Bradley. You are an awesome poet. Love, Shar
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August 27, 2008 at 2:01 AM
Oh dear...you have captured the awfulness of the situation in a very few words. I like your economic style
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