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Only If I Was Charles Xavier

Only if I was Charles Xavier I would have a virtual trip To the kingdom of your heart, To unlock its secret locks, To swim in its lakes, To find the colours of its sands It's coral leaves, its floras, its stones, To know it all___ To wash its rust___ And water its plants Would pour myself ___ Drop by drop ___ To mix with the soil___ To color your roses__ Would you then ___ Know me ___ Like you know your heart? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 1st Nov, 2021 Paghunda Zahid

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Date: 5/13/2022 12:24:00 PM
You have a lovely poetic ability to portray yourself. One can only really know another's emotions and opinions if they let them in. Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem "Play in the sky." Your comment was really motivating, and I hope we can keep this two-way channel open and effective.
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Date: 1/1/2022 11:25:00 AM
Soulful writing. Sister dearest: you have a gift of heart poetry. Happy 2022
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Date: 11/27/2021 10:37:00 AM
Loved your descriptions of an exciting, fantastic journey, Paghunda. Beautiful poetry!
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Date: 11/18/2021 12:39:00 PM
Such original, inspirational poetry, Paghunda!
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/20/2021 9:35:00 AM
Thank you James!
Date: 11/18/2021 11:27:00 AM
what unique thoughts ... but itsn't it exciting to get to know a person for real lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/20/2021 9:34:00 AM
Yeah, and what's real than getting to know a person's heart, and letting him know yours ;)
Date: 11/8/2021 7:03:00 AM
Unfortunately we are not gifted with telepathic powers like Charles Xavier, but that does not stop one from dreaming and writing delightful romantic poetry!! ~ Best regards // paul
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/8/2021 9:43:00 AM
Indeed. Thank you Paul.
Date: 11/7/2021 6:29:00 PM
So sweet!
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/8/2021 9:43:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 11/5/2021 10:41:00 AM
Charles Xavier type abilities, with AI getting stronger, are around everyone's bend. Soon we'll see right into and through people. Scary stuff. ~ Ex-ray
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/8/2021 9:43:00 AM
And then certainly we would like to have something which could protect us from such scary interference. How about that helmet of Magnito... Haha
Date: 11/2/2021 12:21:00 AM
Your poems are history bound, I think you will become a Wordsworth or a Byron - you will receive many honors during your life time and so deservedly so with stupendous poetry like yours dear friend Paghunda. Love and hugs, Jennifer.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/2/2021 5:42:00 AM
Oh goodness, that's really kind of you Proxenos :)
Date: 11/1/2021 4:05:00 AM
A person can only know another's heart if that person lets you in. Even married couples who have been married for years and years only know what the other ones lets them know. you have a very nice poetic way of expressing how you feel. I enjoyed reading your work. Sara
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/1/2021 5:24:00 AM
Hi Sara, you are right. I believe we should let our loved ones know all about our hearts, and they should let us know about theirs. Life would be at easy this way, beautiful, peaceful. Thank you!

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