Only If

beautiful lady
holding you
ever so gently
in the softness
of beauty

as the violin plays
touching souls
under a full moon
i dance
with you

silver shadows
dancing a waltz
touching 
black velvet

in silken 
soft feelings
in loves melody
singing out
in your earthly
beauty

my spirit rises
applauds
in beating wings
the heart 
pounds
on the drums

reaching high
hands out
in a flash 
of light

i hand you 
the moon
flashing stars
wink 
delight
in loves 
tune

as the sun 
kisses the moon
a dancing groom
eclipse
my night

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

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Date: 8/26/2013 5:16:00 PM
magically beautiful with your spoken words, enjoyed this one, ~always, Linda
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/27/2013 3:45:00 AM
Thank you so sweetly for the amazing beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 8/25/2013 3:42:00 PM
This is beautiful , Really nice. I like it , Yvette Kelley , this makes my ancestor's proud to be Irish ..
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/25/2013 4:48:00 PM
beautiful in irish eyes your wonderful comment Yvette thank you sweetly appreciated deeply
Date: 8/25/2013 11:56:00 AM
This beauty invokes so much emotion ..So romantic ..Going to my favs..along with the writer.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/25/2013 3:26:00 PM
Ah that is so beautiful and sweet thank you ever so kindly appreciated deeply
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