Matt Caliri Poet Free verse

Only English Poems Are Allowed

It's too bad there are only English poems allowed,
For I found the most beautiful poem,
the most exact, precise, lush, and sustainable string of words.
But they are from another planet,
A separate universe,
An odd community.

But the words,
Their meaning,
Transfixes time,
Melts the moment.
Decries of new gods.
Turns the very grains of sand into jellybeans.
But, alas, I cannot share it.
Only English language poems are allowed.
Thanks.

Okay, I'll give you the first line:
dlskfh[roeihujn wepfjwpei pweifjw'efipj.

If you knew what that meant.
It would change your world forever.

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Matt Caliri September 15, 2022 at 4:39 PM Yes, Rilke is my all-time favorite poet, the only poet in which I have one of his poems framed in my house. Thanks for your kind words. I would love to see your poem. Rilke is the BEST in my book.

Suzanne Delaney September 15, 2022 at 3:13 PM Hi Matt: I agree with you. One of the most profound exercises I have done was choosing a poem in a foreign language and writing a poem from the feelings I got from the reading words. I chose one of Rainer Marie Rilkes poems. I came fairly close in a lot of the meaning but it was freeing to just write anything. No rules and not really a translation as it was to be done without looking up the words on Babelfish. Will share on my pages if I can find it. Nice to read you. SuZ

Paulette Calasibetta June 29, 2022 at 8:42 AM poetry, like art, is not what we see, it is how it makes us feel.....write on.... :)Paulette

Ann Peck June 27, 2022 at 8:08 AM Well, regardless of Milton and Jeff, I loved your poem. :) I think there are many interpretations of it. (I believe I've heard that mysterious first line somewhere...)

L Milton Hankins June 19, 2022 at 2:31 PM I understand what you are saying, Matt. As far as I'm concerned some of the poems we get here resemble another language, ha! In spite of what Jeff said, I understood what you meant perfectly! So, I reckon my world is changed forever, eh? Enjoyed it.

Jeff Kyser June 19, 2022 at 1:32 PM This is what the Vogon category is for, but I do think you transposed the fifth and sixth letters of the third word… L Milton Hankins June 21, 2022 at 12:25 PM True! True, but I do believe subject/verb agreement is essential in "dlskfh[roeihujn wepfjwpei," don't you? I mean, really........ Jeff Kyser June 19, 2022 at 3:37 PM Lol, could be your dialect was no longer in vogue… :-) L Milton Hankins June 19, 2022 at 2:32 PM Jeff, I think you are totally wrong about this. It is not the transposed letters. It is the tense of the third word, as the first word subject requires!