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Only An Initial

A box a ribbon a card
A dozen white carnations
Attractive underlay for
Twelve sweetheart roses
Soft silky red petals
Delicate tiny buds
On the card not a word
Only an initial
She closed her eyes
Handwriting she recognized
Feelings unexpressed
Lingering embrace



AP: 3rd place 2022

Submitted on October 3, 2017 for contest ROSES AND CARNATIONS sponsored by JULIE LEIGH RODEHEAVER  -  RANKED 4TH

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/13/2017 11:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-earned win in Julie's contest, Line - keep up the great writing! :-)
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Date: 10/14/2017 1:43:00 AM
Thank you. I appreciate your comments.
Date: 10/11/2017 7:39:00 PM
Line, I like your poem a lot, congratulations on your win !
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/12/2017 12:03:00 AM
Thank you so much for your note. Warmest wishes from Ottawa.
Date: 10/11/2017 7:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Line!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/14/2017 1:44:00 AM
Thank you Eve, I appreciate your visit and your taking the time to comment.
Date: 10/10/2017 4:26:00 AM
Nicely penned..GL in the contest
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/10/2017 2:17:00 PM
Thanks Joseph. I appreciate your visit and comment. Best regards from Ottawa.

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