Jennifer Laur Poet Rhyme

Only a Visitor

Going back!
                     Not being a part.
                     A well known return
                     With no book to start.

                     Only a visitor
                     Not able to stay.

                     A worn out excitement
                     To brighten a day


                                  Jennifer Ryan Laur

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Smita Kulkarni September 9, 2019 at 2:27 PM Sweet poem! We are all visitors living our lives on this earth for a few years and leave when our exit comes. Let's enjoy this journey with awareness. Great message!

Kim Rodrigues August 31, 2019 at 2:32 PM Lovely! Thanks for visiting my page :)

Phil Capitano August 31, 2019 at 4:03 AM We are all just visitors here, biological masses bumping around in the dark hoping to find some light. Nicely penned, Jen.

Ann Foster August 28, 2019 at 7:48 PM Oh please stay...stay every day... Hugs... Elves at lunchtime playing hide and seek with butterflies...so much to do... Ann

Andrea Dietrich August 19, 2019 at 3:42 PM well, I for one hope you can stay, and not just for a day!!

Ann Foster August 16, 2019 at 5:19 PM this is a lovely poem... pleast stay forever. Ann

Joseph May August 16, 2019 at 2:23 PM A return that brightens a day...Nicely penned Jennifer..