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Awakened by Princess' kissing and licking my leg..Sad isn't it..This is not Princess but looks similiar..I can't get my pictures on here..

Sara

.. Early_ quiet house Warm, snug under covers _dreams Kiss, hugs, snuggles_ah! Mist rises from creek As dreams take me to seek love Snuggles warmth tickle Kiss, kiss, kiss, snuggles Waking daylight streams through blinds Princess! quit licking__~~ Contest: Morning, noon, or night senryu Sponsor: Francine Roberts Penned by: Sara Kendrick On August 20, 2011 *Note:Click on about this poem..

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Kash Poet

Date: 8/31/2011 10:07:00 PM

Congrats Sara on your win in Francine's contest.Enjoyed this very much.

Dinda Minardi

Date: 8/31/2011 10:21:00 AM

This is very creative, Sara. Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your piece. :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/30/2011 10:03:00 PM

Congrats Sara on your exciting win with this wonderful poetry my friend.. truly a beauty luv..

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 8/30/2011 6:03:00 PM

Nice write,Sara.Congratulations on your win.keep flying.....Love Olusegun..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2011 7:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved winning piece Sara. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 8/30/2011 3:10:00 AM

hey Sara congrats on a great win David

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/29/2011 11:26:00 PM

congrats on your 5th place win Sara, great job

James Fraser

Date: 8/22/2011 5:56:00 PM

Nicely written Senryu set Sara. The last line is nicely crafted, and it was always going to be dog. Good luck in Francine's contest with this koolio poetry :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/21/2011 10:45:00 PM

I love the image behind your words. And yes Sara, I got your poem. I am so glad you came up with one. And when you read my part i hope you will enjoy it. Have a nice one,..p.d.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/21/2011 9:28:00 PM

Is Princess your dog Francine, I have to think she is but was expecting to be a man! An endearing verse............PS It's Emily's lover speaking to her. Sometimes I have to play the other part.

Elizabeth Wesley
Date: 8/21/2011 9:30:00 PM

Sorry Sara, I just wrote one to Francine and my mind hasn't moved on yet! Silly me.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/21/2011 5:50:00 PM

reminds me of me and my Venus with that last line Sara,.. very nice cute entry luv ..good luck.. am missing her now with vacation days ahead of us for two more weeks.. but we 'talk' on the phone.. oh..

Richard Moriarty

Date: 8/21/2011 4:09:00 PM

You should win with this one, the last line got me though

James Foulk

Date: 8/21/2011 3:18:00 PM

a very creative piece you wrote Sara. I'm at the Library, my internet is not working, the internet exploer keeps shouting down. i had a tech out to my house he fixed it, then it broke down next day, yesterday it shout down three times. so i may be leaving soup before i planned to, which would have been the 27th. thank you for commenting on my poetry.

Kevin Clark

Date: 8/21/2011 2:54:00 PM

Very cute and funny Sara "as dreams take me to seek love" I like that.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/21/2011 5:48:00 AM

ohhh, sara.. this is so spontaneous, so natural i wish i could give you a real hugg!!.. morning becomes you!.. winning wishes; had soup interuption for 24 hours.. ohhhh!.. :) nette

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/20/2011 7:49:00 PM

I had to check out the picture, too cute, you have soup mail

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/20/2011 5:13:00 PM

How sweet! Don't we all just love our pets! This is a great poem, love the form, did well with the form! Good write!!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/20/2011 3:26:00 PM

One of my fav. forms from one of my fav. poets.... good luck in the contest....luv Michael

Adrienne Gresham

Date: 8/20/2011 12:56:00 PM

This is good. Thanks for making me laugh this morning. Have a great day.