Sara Kendrick Poet Senryu

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Awakened by Princess' kissing and licking my leg..Sad isn't it..This is not Princess but looks similiar..I can't get my pictures on here..

Sara

Only a Dream

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                                                 Early_ quiet house
                                     Warm, snug under covers _dreams
                                           Kiss, hugs, snuggles_ah!
                                          
                                              
                                             Mist rises from creek
                                      As dreams take me to seek love
                                            Snuggles warmth tickle


                                           Kiss, kiss, kiss, snuggles
                              Waking daylight streams through blinds
                                         Princess! quit licking__~~



Contest: Morning, noon, or night senryu
Sponsor: Francine Roberts
Penned by: Sara Kendrick
On August 20, 2011
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Kash Poet August 31, 2011 at 10:07 PM Congrats Sara on your win in Francine's contest.Enjoyed this very much.

Dinda Minardi August 31, 2011 at 10:21 AM This is very creative, Sara. Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your piece. :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 30, 2011 at 10:03 PM Congrats Sara on your exciting win with this wonderful poetry my friend.. truly a beauty luv..

Olusegun Arowolo August 30, 2011 at 6:03 PM Nice write,Sara.Congratulations on your win.keep flying.....Love Olusegun..

Carol Sunshine Brown August 30, 2011 at 7:28 AM Congratulations on your well deserved winning piece Sara. Love, Carol

David Williams August 30, 2011 at 3:10 AM hey Sara congrats on a great win David

Francine Roberts August 29, 2011 at 11:26 PM congrats on your 5th place win Sara, great job

James Fraser August 22, 2011 at 5:56 PM Nicely written Senryu set Sara. The last line is nicely crafted, and it was always going to be dog. Good luck in Francine's contest with this koolio poetry :)

Poet Destroyer A August 21, 2011 at 10:45 PM I love the image behind your words. And yes Sara, I got your poem. I am so glad you came up with one. And when you read my part i hope you will enjoy it. Have a nice one,..p.d.

Elizabeth Wesley August 21, 2011 at 9:28 PM Is Princess your dog Francine, I have to think she is but was expecting to be a man! An endearing verse............PS It's Emily's lover speaking to her. Sometimes I have to play the other part. Elizabeth Wesley August 21, 2011 at 9:30 PM Sorry Sara, I just wrote one to Francine and my mind hasn't moved on yet! Silly me.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 21, 2011 at 5:50 PM reminds me of me and my Venus with that last line Sara,.. very nice cute entry luv ..good luck.. am missing her now with vacation days ahead of us for two more weeks.. but we 'talk' on the phone.. oh..

Richard Moriarty August 21, 2011 at 4:09 PM You should win with this one, the last line got me though

James Foulk August 21, 2011 at 3:18 PM a very creative piece you wrote Sara. I'm at the Library, my internet is not working, the internet exploer keeps shouting down. i had a tech out to my house he fixed it, then it broke down next day, yesterday it shout down three times. so i may be leaving soup before i planned to, which would have been the 27th. thank you for commenting on my poetry.

Kevin Clark August 21, 2011 at 2:54 PM Very cute and funny Sara "as dreams take me to seek love" I like that.

Nette Onclaud August 21, 2011 at 5:48 AM ohhh, sara.. this is so spontaneous, so natural i wish i could give you a real hugg!!.. morning becomes you!.. winning wishes; had soup interuption for 24 hours.. ohhhh!.. :) nette

Francine Roberts August 20, 2011 at 7:49 PM I had to check out the picture, too cute, you have soup mail

Russell Sivey August 20, 2011 at 5:13 PM How sweet! Don't we all just love our pets! This is a great poem, love the form, did well with the form! Good write!!

Michael J. Falotico August 20, 2011 at 3:26 PM One of my fav. forms from one of my fav. poets.... good luck in the contest....luv Michael

Adrienne Gresham August 20, 2011 at 12:56 PM This is good. Thanks for making me laugh this morning. Have a great day.