Kevin Leake Poet Rhyme

Online Shopping

Technology taking over
Faster than we know
Smart phones and pretty gadgets
All these androids on the go
Shops are closing faster
Faster than we think 
More jobs gone tomorrow
It’s an online shopping dream
Online shopping dream



Amazon, Ebay and Wal-Mart
Just to name a few
Online shopping for everyone
Is the future scaring you
You’ve got so many passwords
You can’t remember them
You’d rather stop but you need to shop
It’s an online shopping trend
Online shopping trend



Sitting here waiting patiently
For the parcel to come
We’ve got the date just can’t wait
But that parcel having fun 
Has it been left outside my door
Because I never heard a ring
It’s likely disappeared again
That parcels’ a mystery



I miss that window shopping
The try before you buy
I used to shop until I’d drop
But you can kiss it all goodbye



So link your card to your account
Then you can do it too
Start your shopping online now
There’s not much else to do
Big name shops are closing down
They seem to follow suit
Joining in the online crowd
It’s an online shopping move
Online shopping move



Sitting here waiting patiently
For the parcel to come
We’ve got the date just can’t wait
But that parcel having fun 
Has it been left outside my door
Because I never heard a ring
It’s likely disappeared again
That parcels’ a mystery



© Copyright KC.Leake
15th December 2016
All Rights Reserved

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Freddie Robinson Jr. January 26, 2017 at 2:16 PM A great send up poem, Kevin. Had me laughing all the way through. Very keen and pointed observations. Excellent poem, my friend. Love and peace to you.

David Meade December 19, 2016 at 2:15 PM I lives get so busy that we miss the chance to stroll along main street -- talking to friends, laughing and singing. Gotta go, just heard the door bell, I believe it's the UPS guy! Nicely done Mr. Leake Kevin Leake December 20, 2016 at 3:29 AM Thanks David, For the visit and comments, glad you liked it!! Best Wishes Kevin

Jan Allison December 18, 2016 at 5:25 PM I much prefer to see the article and rarely buy on line - so sad to see small businesses closing as they cannot compete with the big boys on line:-( hugs jan xx Kevin Leake December 18, 2016 at 5:44 PM Thanks Jan for visit and comments, It seems that a lot of things now you can't get in the shops, for instance there's only two stores in my town that sale car accessories now, all have disappeared. Best wishes Kevin

Judy Ball December 17, 2016 at 4:54 PM Hmmmm Scary stuff this online shopping. I prefer the old way myself but then I'm from a different era. Great job here Kevin. A seven from me. God Bless, JB Kevin Leake December 18, 2016 at 5:39 PM Thanks Judy, Appreciate your comments and visit, there's nothing like window shopping is there, going out to the town!! Best wishes Kevin

Anne-Lise Andresen December 15, 2016 at 9:10 AM - A friend ordered all Christmas gifts on line last year .... they arrived a week after Christmas .... I dare not ... but, easily - A wonderful poem, Kevin .... hope everything arrives on time - Best wishes for a peaceful and beautiful Christmas for you and your family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kevin Leake December 15, 2016 at 10:44 AM Thanks Anne, I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the kind comments and visit And have a wonderful christmas Best Wishes Kevin

Probir Gupta December 15, 2016 at 5:08 AM Very well expressed sentiments on the disappearing human touch and the expanding online commerce ... Enjoyed reading ... Kevin Leake December 15, 2016 at 10:41 AM Thanks for the visit and kind words Probir, Glad you enjoyed it Best wishes Kevin