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Online Shopping

Technology taking over Faster than we know Smart phones and pretty gadgets All these androids on the go Shops are closing faster Faster than we think More jobs gone tomorrow It’s an online shopping dream Online shopping dream Amazon, Ebay and Wal-Mart Just to name a few Online shopping for everyone Is the future scaring you You’ve got so many passwords You can’t remember them You’d rather stop but you need to shop It’s an online shopping trend Online shopping trend Sitting here waiting patiently For the parcel to come We’ve got the date just can’t wait But that parcel having fun Has it been left outside my door Because I never heard a ring It’s likely disappeared again That parcels’ a mystery I miss that window shopping The try before you buy I used to shop until I’d drop But you can kiss it all goodbye So link your card to your account Then you can do it too Start your shopping online now There’s not much else to do Big name shops are closing down They seem to follow suit Joining in the online crowd It’s an online shopping move Online shopping move Sitting here waiting patiently For the parcel to come We’ve got the date just can’t wait But that parcel having fun Has it been left outside my door Because I never heard a ring It’s likely disappeared again That parcels’ a mystery © Copyright KC.Leake 15th December 2016 All Rights Reserved

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/26/2017 2:16:00 PM

A great send up poem, Kevin. Had me laughing all the way through. Very keen and pointed observations. Excellent poem, my friend. Love and peace to you.

David Meade

Date: 12/19/2016 2:15:00 PM

I lives get so busy that we miss the chance to stroll along main street -- talking to friends, laughing and singing. Gotta go, just heard the door bell, I believe it's the UPS guy! Nicely done Mr. Leake

Kevin Leake
Date: 12/20/2016 3:29:00 AM

Thanks David, For the visit and comments, glad you liked it!! Best Wishes Kevin

Jan Allison

Date: 12/18/2016 5:25:00 PM

I much prefer to see the article and rarely buy on line - so sad to see small businesses closing as they cannot compete with the big boys on line:-( hugs jan xx

Kevin Leake
Date: 12/18/2016 5:44:00 PM

Thanks Jan for visit and comments, It seems that a lot of things now you can't get in the shops, for instance there's only two stores in my town that sale car accessories now, all have disappeared. Best wishes Kevin

Judy Ball

Date: 12/17/2016 4:54:00 PM

Hmmmm Scary stuff this online shopping. I prefer the old way myself but then I'm from a different era. Great job here Kevin. A seven from me. God Bless, JB

Kevin Leake
Date: 12/18/2016 5:39:00 PM

Thanks Judy, Appreciate your comments and visit, there's nothing like window shopping is there, going out to the town!! Best wishes Kevin

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/15/2016 9:10:00 AM

- A friend ordered all Christmas gifts on line last year .... they arrived a week after Christmas .... I dare not ... but, easily - A wonderful poem, Kevin .... hope everything arrives on time - Best wishes for a peaceful and beautiful Christmas for you and your family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kevin Leake
Date: 12/15/2016 10:44:00 AM

Thanks Anne, I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the kind comments and visit And have a wonderful christmas Best Wishes Kevin

Probir Gupta

Date: 12/15/2016 5:08:00 AM

Very well expressed sentiments on the disappearing human touch and the expanding online commerce ... Enjoyed reading ...

Kevin Leake
Date: 12/15/2016 10:41:00 AM

Thanks for the visit and kind words Probir, Glad you enjoyed it Best wishes Kevin