One-Up-Put-Downs

monchielle stanza

One-up-put-downs are nails:
What hubby puts up with
he usually puts down.
“Your lattice-lace curtains
make our windows look like clowns.”

One-up-put-downs are nails:
I remind him of lights -
Christmas lights on windows
put up in November.
“It’s March now, lights must go.”

One-up-put-downs are nails:
The star on the garage
has shone for three full years.
Awaiting some wise man
with ladder to appear.

One-up-put-downs are nails:
Wedding pics hung in place,
may come down due to strife
which hangs in the balance 
between husband and wife.

written February 28, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kauffman Avatar
September 12, 2020 at 12:02 PM
This is real, Reason! The push - pull of a marital relationship! I pray the wedding pictures stay up! Congratulations on your win!
Poteet Avatar
September 13, 2020 at 6:43 AM
Thanks, Sam, it’s hard but oh so worth it.
Kendrick Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 12:46 PM
Congrats on your work being in Andrea's favs' list andon the winners' page..Sara
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May 1, 2016 at 6:59 PM
Reason, Congratulations on your win in Andrea's fave contest. XOX - LINDA
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 12:29 PM
lovely the impact of the repeated phrase congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 4:01 PM
REason, this is EXCELLENT writing on that topic of up and down. I really enjoyed this clever piece. FAVE
Poteet Avatar
March 1, 2016 at 11:48 AM
thank you, Andrea, I welcome your comment and of course, the time it took to read and write a reply.
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