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Ones Own Drive

You are adept at burrowing and slithering. Fight your way through the mud, bungling, and spilling. Plunged into the insides of the rind and outer casing. The further you lead, beyond troublesome it is becoming. Thinking over this is compulsatory rehearsing. Assumptions might be thwarted by the finding.
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Pandit Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 5:58 AM
You shine in these monorhymes, Lasaad. Much ponder from your thoughts.
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August 23, 2021 at 7:45 AM
Thank you very much, Vijay, for your nice words and delightful comment. Blessings and best wishes
Buhagiar Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 2:25 AM
Brilliant poem Lasaad. Much enjoyed.
Poet Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 7:44 AM
Thank you very much, Victor, for your nice words and delightful comment. Blessings and best wishes
Rose  Avatar
August 22, 2021 at 3:10 PM
Nothing greater then the true reality, the heart will never be satisfied until it sheds all falsities. Thankyou for this beautiful poem Lasaad
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August 22, 2021 at 3:18 PM
Thank you so much for the sweet words and the beautiful comment, dear friend Rose. A point of view from such a talented poet reinvigorates the spirit and sheds enchantment on the poem. Have a wonderful evening.
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