Ones Own Drive

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You are adept at burrowing and slithering. Fight your way through the mud, bungling, and spilling. Plunged into the insides of the rind and outer casing. The further you lead, beyond troublesome it is becoming. Thinking over this is compulsatory rehearsing. Assumptions might be thwarted by the finding.

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/23/2021 5:58:00 AM

You shine in these monorhymes, Lasaad. Much ponder from your thoughts.

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/23/2021 7:45:00 AM

Thank you very much, Vijay, for your nice words and delightful comment. Blessings and best wishes

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/23/2021 2:25:00 AM

Brilliant poem Lasaad. Much enjoyed.

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/23/2021 7:44:00 AM

Thank you very much, Victor, for your nice words and delightful comment. Blessings and best wishes

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/22/2021 3:10:00 PM

Nothing greater then the true reality, the heart will never be satisfied until it sheds all falsities. Thankyou for this beautiful poem Lasaad

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/22/2021 3:18:00 PM

Thank you so much for the sweet words and the beautiful comment, dear friend Rose. A point of view from such a talented poet reinvigorates the spirit and sheds enchantment on the poem. Have a wonderful evening.