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Oneness

River runs in the incised rocky terrain Boat plunges in a propelling whirlpool Gyrating agony of attrition perpetuates Time to get winsome winds of solace On the battered sail. Winter mist wraps the wilted horizon Shrouded sun deludes the dreaming dawn Sanctum of stratified gloom freezes within Time to paint the patina of joy On the petals of hope. Sky crumbles into the sands of time Hued rapture of rainbow melts away I sink in the sea of boundless bliss within Enlightened I find the oneness illumined Between Him and me. April 25, 2020 For Brian Strand's Contest All Yours (Mar 12)

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Date: 3/13/2021 4:35:00 AM
Nice imagery! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/13/2021 3:04:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 3/12/2021 3:52:00 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in Brian's All Yours contest with this wonderful Free Verse, well done _Constance
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Date: 4/25/2019 1:51:00 PM
Sinking without, rising within - fascinating juxtaposition in the extraordinary tension depicted. Nicely done, Subimal. ~ gw
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