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One Word Wonder

Dive deeply down in "MUSE" Splitting it into "ME" Then turning towards "US" End with the thought to "USE" Few memes meaning so much Muses make that timeless touch Bite Size Poem 2 Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier 5/24/21

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Gary Smith

Date: 6/4/2021 2:35:00 PM

Very good Greg, congrats. :)

Greg Gaul
Date: 6/4/2021 5:56:00 PM

Gary, thanks so much for the visit and kind remark.

Gary Radice

Date: 6/1/2021 11:38:00 AM

Your words Greg belong in a poetry 'museum' so everyone can see and read and enjoy. Cheers - Gary

Greg Gaul
Date: 6/3/2021 6:25:00 AM

Gary, your support is unwavering in a sea of conventional thinking. Thank you so much.

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/29/2021 6:37:00 PM

Very clever, Greg! Congrats on your HM! Blessings, Kim M

Greg Gaul
Date: 5/30/2021 4:54:00 PM

Kim, your visit and kind remarks are most appreciated.

David Kavanagh

Date: 5/29/2021 3:33:00 PM

Striping back words is great fun Greg, but here you so well deconstructed the muse And brought a meaningful piece to fruition, I was expecting some emus to make an appearance, lol, congratulations on a fine placement, cheers David

Greg Gaul
Date: 5/30/2021 4:57:00 PM

My deconstruction made at least one poet happy. Thanks David for the comment and visit.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/29/2021 11:36:00 AM

Brilliant perception Greg! You have delved deeply into the mystical essence of the word with eloquence. I love seeing words in words. Wonderful job! Congratulations on your win my friend!

Greg Gaul
Date: 5/30/2021 4:56:00 PM

Sam, so nice of you comment on the word play. Most appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2021 9:04:00 AM

I am back with my congrats. More people need to see this one!!

Greg Gaul
Date: 5/29/2021 9:38:00 AM

Andrea, this will tickle you. After your comment, I knew there was something missing still. It took a day or two but I added the "Muses..." last line to tie it all together better and drop in some more alliteration. So your comments do have effect. You are quite thoughtful and skillful. Thank you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/24/2021 4:23:00 PM

that is SUPER GREAT thinking!!

Greg Gaul
Date: 5/24/2021 5:21:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, four very hard working letters. Appreciate your comment.