Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

One Tune

Looking divine a picture goddess 
jewels crowning gems sparkling magic 
shining beautiful moon princess dazzling light

At a regal glance priceless cut, shines out diamond
silver ivory full face over and back 
we dance into the milky way to paradise

In silver shadows we kiss holding sweetly our love
our souls sparkle together amazing dreams shine
this picture forever lives in the mind one treasure

Most adoring of all queens gracious 
sweetheart I pray soon one day we will always 
be together all I ever want to do deeply

Is make you smile embraced with happiness  
its dark here alone shining in all dreams
Light of a thousand stars halo shine around you babe
 
Silken ribbons whisper tenderly soft
in every thought a warm breeze sails 
Silently this boat to you on golden waves 

Only if you wish darling 
one in a thousand dreams that come true  
you're the  sweet night in gale singing inside always now in your tune

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J Hamilton Gist January 4, 2016 at 1:49 PM This must be about someone for who you truly care... I like it. Come check me out when you can.

Prasad Bolimeru November 29, 2015 at 10:34 AM ===== sweet night in gale singing inside always now in your tune ====nice....

Rizwana Bhurani November 29, 2015 at 9:44 AM A dazzling poetic piece with ample of lovely words....loved reading it

Richard Lamoureux December 12, 2014 at 7:41 AM You sweet talker you! This is a magical piece Liam. Liam Mcdaid December 13, 2014 at 12:11 PM smiling richard when you hold something deep beautiful always sings though the pen wonderful comment dear friend bless you

Dorian Petersen Potter December 11, 2014 at 10:05 PM Awesome! Another very beautiful romantic and dazzling poem Liam! So full of love and gentleness. Just perfect! A 7 +++for you! Your Quill is just amazing dearest friend. May you always feel the presence and warmth of God and all his angels to shower blessing on your tendered heart with all their love and peace! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D." Liam Mcdaid December 13, 2014 at 12:08 PM dorian truly wonderful comment dear friend thank you kindly depply appreciated bless you

David Meade December 11, 2014 at 6:46 PM The lover of women and words has crafted another beautiful love poem. Inviting love, passionate but not demanding. I like the word play in the last line -- very clever. All the best my friend. Liam Mcdaid December 13, 2014 at 12:06 PM smiling david the silver treasure thoughts trying to paint most beautiful wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated pal

Gary Bateman December 11, 2014 at 1:57 PM Liam My Mate!! One Tune -- One Leprechaun -- One Gracious Sweetheart -- and One Very Fine Poem Here!! I really enjoyed the river and rhythm of your words and verses here!! The "Leprechaun Choir" will be singing all night over this fine write!! Best Always, Gary Liam Mcdaid December 11, 2014 at 5:53 PM well tonight the leprechaun is smiling looking into the stars lol wonderful comment gary heartfelt appreciated pal