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One Tune

Looking divine a picture goddess jewels crowning gems sparkling magic shining beautiful moon princess dazzling light At a regal glance priceless cut, shines out diamond silver ivory full face over and back we dance into the milky way to paradise In silver shadows we kiss holding sweetly our love our souls sparkle together amazing dreams shine this picture forever lives in the mind one treasure Most adoring of all queens gracious sweetheart I pray soon one day we will always be together all I ever want to do deeply Is make you smile embraced with happiness its dark here alone shining in all dreams Light of a thousand stars halo shine around you babe Silken ribbons whisper tenderly soft in every thought a warm breeze sails Silently this boat to you on golden waves Only if you wish darling one in a thousand dreams that come true you're the sweet night in gale singing inside always now in your tune

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/4/2016 1:49:00 PM
This must be about someone for who you truly care... I like it. Come check me out when you can.
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Date: 11/29/2015 10:34:00 AM
===== sweet night in gale singing inside always now in your tune ====nice....
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Date: 11/29/2015 9:44:00 AM
A dazzling poetic piece with ample of lovely words....loved reading it
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Date: 12/12/2014 7:41:00 AM
You sweet talker you! This is a magical piece Liam.
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liam mcdaid
Date: 12/13/2014 12:11:00 PM
smiling richard when you hold something deep beautiful always sings though the pen wonderful comment dear friend bless you
Date: 12/11/2014 10:05:00 PM
Awesome! Another very beautiful romantic and dazzling poem Liam! So full of love and gentleness. Just perfect! A 7 +++for you! Your Quill is just amazing dearest friend. May you always feel the presence and warmth of God and all his angels to shower blessing on your tendered heart with all their love and peace! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D."
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liam mcdaid
Date: 12/13/2014 12:08:00 PM
dorian truly wonderful comment dear friend thank you kindly depply appreciated bless you
Date: 12/11/2014 6:46:00 PM
The lover of women and words has crafted another beautiful love poem. Inviting love, passionate but not demanding. I like the word play in the last line -- very clever. All the best my friend.
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liam mcdaid
Date: 12/13/2014 12:06:00 PM
smiling david the silver treasure thoughts trying to paint most beautiful wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated pal
Date: 12/11/2014 1:57:00 PM
Liam My Mate!! One Tune -- One Leprechaun -- One Gracious Sweetheart -- and One Very Fine Poem Here!! I really enjoyed the river and rhythm of your words and verses here!! The "Leprechaun Choir" will be singing all night over this fine write!! Best Always, Gary
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liam mcdaid
Date: 12/11/2014 5:53:00 PM
well tonight the leprechaun is smiling looking into the stars lol wonderful comment gary heartfelt appreciated pal