One Tune

Looking divine a picture goddess 
jewels crowning gems sparkling magic 
shining beautiful moon princess dazzling light

At a regal glance priceless cut, shines out diamond
silver ivory full face over and back 
we dance into the milky way to paradise

In silver shadows we kiss holding sweetly our love
our souls sparkle together amazing dreams shine
this picture forever lives in the mind one treasure

Most adoring of all queens gracious 
sweetheart I pray soon one day we will always 
be together all I ever want to do deeply

Is make you smile embraced with happiness  
its dark here alone shining in all dreams
Light of a thousand stars halo shine around you babe
 
Silken ribbons whisper tenderly soft
in every thought a warm breeze sails 
Silently this boat to you on golden waves 

Only if you wish darling 
one in a thousand dreams that come true  
you're the  sweet night in gale singing inside always now in your tune

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/4/2016 1:49:00 PM
This must be about someone for who you truly care... I like it. Come check me out when you can.
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Date: 11/29/2015 10:34:00 AM
===== sweet night in gale singing inside always now in your tune ====nice....
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Date: 11/29/2015 9:44:00 AM
A dazzling poetic piece with ample of lovely words....loved reading it
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Date: 12/12/2014 7:41:00 AM
You sweet talker you! This is a magical piece Liam.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/13/2014 12:11:00 PM
smiling richard when you hold something deep beautiful always sings though the pen wonderful comment dear friend bless you
Date: 12/11/2014 10:05:00 PM
Awesome! Another very beautiful romantic and dazzling poem Liam! So full of love and gentleness. Just perfect! A 7 +++for you! Your Quill is just amazing dearest friend. May you always feel the presence and warmth of God and all his angels to shower blessing on your tendered heart with all their love and peace! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D."
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/13/2014 12:08:00 PM
dorian truly wonderful comment dear friend thank you kindly depply appreciated bless you
Date: 12/11/2014 6:46:00 PM
The lover of women and words has crafted another beautiful love poem. Inviting love, passionate but not demanding. I like the word play in the last line -- very clever. All the best my friend.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/13/2014 12:06:00 PM
smiling david the silver treasure thoughts trying to paint most beautiful wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated pal
Date: 12/11/2014 1:57:00 PM
Liam My Mate!! One Tune -- One Leprechaun -- One Gracious Sweetheart -- and One Very Fine Poem Here!! I really enjoyed the river and rhythm of your words and verses here!! The "Leprechaun Choir" will be singing all night over this fine write!! Best Always, Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/11/2014 5:53:00 PM
well tonight the leprechaun is smiling looking into the stars lol wonderful comment gary heartfelt appreciated pal
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