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One Too Many

I once knew a man from Decatur who worked day and night as a waiter. Poor lad married a lass after too many a glass of ale, now to her he must cater.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/18/2015 9:31:00 PM
If he just keeps on drinking. I'm sure she'll start thinking. And she'll just leave him sooner than later.
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Date: 6/5/2012 11:01:00 AM
Wonderful and creative write! Loved the last line, summed it up nicely :) Great Work!!
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Date: 6/5/2012 8:35:00 AM
Nice rhythm on this one. I think I know the waiter.
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Date: 6/5/2012 8:23:00 AM
Rhonda,, ahh the drink to blame agin, ha ha ...David
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Date: 6/5/2012 6:55:00 AM
Funny, funny... Terry
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Date: 6/5/2012 6:16:00 AM
Thanks for the giggle Rhonda lol..Hugs xx
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Date: 6/5/2012 2:36:00 AM
so very true in so many cases, enjoyed its fun!:)Jag
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Date: 6/5/2012 2:22:00 AM
LOL,POOOR DECATAUR!!! VERY FUNNY!!!
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