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Where’d you go, boy - I’ve no way of knowing. Life without you’s, less fun, than as I was hoping, if you asked me, I’d have to say I’m coping, but there are definitely times, I feel less devoted. Hey, I’ve told you over and over and over again my friend that what I need, obviously, is seduction. Don't you understand what I'm trying to say? Can't you feel the need that I'm feeling today? We’re back in class now - it’s already getting stressful, and you know how quickly unwinding gets essential. I’ve gotten used to things that I shouldn’t say, If I get desperate, there’ll surely be hell to pay. And I’ve told you over and over and over again my friend that what I need, almost immediately, is seduction. Take a beat boy, I don’t wanna to be unfair here, with any luck, you're already on a plane here. I can hardly wait, my blood is boiling, this is the last plea, I’ll be employing. I think you understand what I'm sayin’, and I think you know, that I’m not playin’, cause I’ve told you, over and over and over again my friend that what I need, immediately, is seduction.

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Date: 9/1/2023 9:53:00 PM
Anais, What's in a name 'one the eve'. Like to see stars and the ISS streak across the sky. Don't know why, but it's always yours I wave to. -Richard
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Date: 9/3/2023 12:17:00 PM
That’s such a fine line, I could never accept it =]
Date: 9/1/2023 3:58:00 PM
Ardent plea. The only question is: is he listening?
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Date: 9/1/2023 5:09:00 PM
Ooo, ardent plea, I like it! This is just a fun bit. He always listens =]

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