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One Sunflower Bloomed

With his baggy overalls And a worn, plaid cap, The old farmer recalls With a piglet in his lap Seated on the porch swing Of his aging farmhouse, He saw not a thing ... But the life of a louse A barn roof bowed Stressing sparse board, Tractor's down the road Needs what he can't afford Fields bare and dry Never mind the cornstalks, Who were not knee-high Down the row he walks On a day, too hot to toil When the man couldn't cope, At the corner of the soil There stood a ray of hope And so it was ... He felt less doomed, Simply and because ... One sunflower bloomed.

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Date: 7/25/2023 9:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Great Ending... Have a great day....................
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/1/2024 4:29:00 PM
Thank you, Paula. I appreciate the kind words :)
Date: 7/25/2023 5:55:00 AM
"And so it was ... He felt less doomed, Simply and because ... One sunflower bloomed" - So down-to-earth story. Congratulations!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/28/2024 5:06:00 PM
Thank you for reading... I appreciate the kind words :)
Date: 7/25/2023 1:24:00 AM
Great story of a depressed farmer who found hope in the end, Kelly, congratulations:)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/28/2024 4:58:00 PM
Thank you for reading, Joanna ... I appreciate the kind words :)
Date: 7/21/2023 6:46:00 AM
Oh, the exquisite rhyme scheme, adorned with captivating imagery. It is truly awe-inspiring how a solitary flower possesses such profound influence, particularly within the most auspicious moment.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/27/2024 5:25:00 PM
Thank you so much for the kind words, as always :)
Date: 7/18/2023 10:18:00 AM
love the rhyme pattern beautiful imagery too xx
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/27/2024 5:08:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words, David :)
Date: 7/11/2023 6:32:00 PM
Ah, amazing the power of one flower and the most opportune hour, thank you for sharing such a unique poem Kelly :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/26/2024 4:13:00 PM
Thank you for reading, Vie ... I appreciate the kind words, as always :)

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