One Sunflower Bloomed

With his baggy overalls 
And a worn, plaid cap,
The old farmer recalls 
With a piglet in his lap 

Seated on the porch swing
Of his aging farmhouse, 
He saw not a thing ...
But the life of a louse

A barn roof bowed
Stressing sparse board,
Tractor's down the road
Needs what he can't afford 

Fields bare and dry
Never mind the cornstalks,
Who were not knee-high
Down the row he walks

On a day, too hot to toil
When the man couldn't cope,
At the corner of the soil
There stood a ray of hope

And so it was ...
He felt less doomed,
Simply and because ...
One sunflower bloomed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 9:46 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Great Ending... Have a great day....................
Deschler Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 4:29 PM
Thank you, Paula. I appreciate the kind words :)
Alex Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 5:55 AM
"And so it was ... He felt less doomed, Simply and because ... One sunflower bloomed" - So down-to-earth story. Congratulations!
Deschler Avatar
January 28, 2024 at 5:06 PM
Thank you for reading... I appreciate the kind words :)
Daniel Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 1:24 AM
Great story of a depressed farmer who found hope in the end, Kelly, congratulations:)
Deschler Avatar
January 28, 2024 at 4:58 PM
Thank you for reading, Joanna ... I appreciate the kind words :)
Poet Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 6:46 AM
Oh, the exquisite rhyme scheme, adorned with captivating imagery. It is truly awe-inspiring how a solitary flower possesses such profound influence, particularly within the most auspicious moment.
Deschler Avatar
January 27, 2024 at 5:25 PM
Thank you so much for the kind words, as always :)
Scott Avatar
July 18, 2023 at 10:18 AM
love the rhyme pattern beautiful imagery too xx
Deschler Avatar
January 27, 2024 at 5:08 PM
Thank you for the kind words, David :)
Rose  Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 6:32 PM
Ah, amazing the power of one flower and the most opportune hour, thank you for sharing such a unique poem Kelly :)
Deschler Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 4:13 PM
Thank you for reading, Vie ... I appreciate the kind words, as always :)
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