One Star Jubilee

one star jubilee

hidden spark awakes
 deep within the astral womb ~
  cloud nebulas swirl

star light grows brighter
 new celestial wonder rises ~
  winter skies glitter

north star light grows dim
 silent radiance resounds ~ 
  wild shadows scatter

compass in starlight
 fiery orb shows the milestones ~
  solar winds carol

one star jubilee
 lights the way on desert paths ~
  heaven star chorale

12-1-22

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Date: 12/11/2022 9:04:00 PM
You've crafted an amazing chain of haiku my dearest friend Sam! Congratulations on your shining win! Thank you so much for sharing. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 12/11/2022 7:15:00 PM
Beautiful win, dear. Congratulations
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/13/2022 10:45:00 AM
Really had fun reaching deep into space to imagine the birth of this star. Thank you for your note and your congratulations! Blessings!!
Date: 12/11/2022 9:14:00 AM
Congratulations, Sam! Your poem is lovely!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/13/2022 10:44:00 AM
Many thanks coming your way, Ann. Your lovely message is such a joy! Thank you for your congratulations. Blessings!
Date: 12/11/2022 7:33:00 AM
Back with congratulations on this winner. Sara
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/13/2022 10:41:00 AM
Thank you so much Sara. Your congratulations put a big :) in my heart and on my face. Blessings!
Date: 12/11/2022 7:29:00 AM
Beautiful Sam! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/13/2022 10:39:00 AM
Linda, thank you so much. Such an honor to be on the winners list! So pleased you enjoyed this haiku string! Blessings to you!
Date: 12/11/2022 6:00:00 AM
Back with congratulations!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/13/2022 10:38:00 AM
Many heartfelt thanks Kim. I couldn't get the birth of the Star of Bethlehem out of my mind. It so inspired this poem. Sending you blessings of joy in starlight!
Date: 12/11/2022 5:44:00 AM
Great writing. Congratulations!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/13/2022 10:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Chris! This haiku string was fun to write!
Date: 12/11/2022 5:35:00 AM
The cosmic glow of your pen never fades. Congratulations Sam.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/13/2022 10:35:00 AM
Hi JCB! Thank you so much for your delightful feedback and your congratulations! So appreciated my friend. The stars are truly an endless source of inspiration! It is an honor to be on the winners list. Sending you blessings of joy in starlight!
Date: 12/3/2022 11:54:00 AM
This is a delightful string of three-liners related to one another, Sam! Your creativity shines. ~Regards // paul
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/5/2022 10:54:00 AM
Paul, I am so grateful for your message and your feedback!!! It is wonderful to know that the story behind the haiku string came through. Thank you for that gift! Hope you are well. Sending you blessings of light and joy!
Date: 12/2/2022 2:03:00 PM
Enjoyed reading these. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/3/2022 10:14:00 AM
Thank you Sara. Sending you my heartfelt gratitude! I kept thinking about the Star of Bethlehem as a heavenly birth announcement for Jesus and how it might have been born! So glad you enjoyed these haiku musings! Blessings!
Date: 12/2/2022 1:01:00 PM
Sam, this is a vividly descriptive, appealing piece! Janice
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/3/2022 10:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Janice! Stargazing has always been a favorite pastime! Mother Nature paints so much wonder in the stars! Hope you are well. Blessings.
Date: 12/2/2022 11:41:00 AM
Third verse was my favorite! Very nice, Sam!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/3/2022 10:09:00 AM
Many thanks coming your way Kim! Have learned to love writing haiku so much can be said in those seventeen syllables!!! Blessings to you!
Date: 12/2/2022 3:22:00 AM
Love these haiku's, Sam. Beautiful imagery. Lovely! Hugs Charlie
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/2/2022 10:14:00 AM
Hi Charlie! I am so happy that you loved these haikus - certainly gave my day a little lift! Thank you for that gift. As I mentioned to Jo, the birth of the Star of Bethlehem kept coming to mind and inspired this string. Had a wonderful time putting it together. Sending you all the blessings of the season and, of course, a hug, my friend.
Date: 12/1/2022 11:22:00 PM
Lovely string of heavenly haikus, Sam:)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/2/2022 10:06:00 AM
Hi Jo! Thank you so much! The image of the Star of Bethlehem and its birth just kept bubbling up and was the inspiration for this haiku string. I am so happy you enjoyed it. Sending you all the blessings of this holy season in starlight!
Date: 12/1/2022 3:06:00 PM
Very discriptive haiku Sam, the heavens fascinates me I know in orion there's a pale patch near the belt and where new stars are born. If it's for a contest good luck. Over Fork Over. Tom
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 12/1/2022 3:15:00 PM
Thank you so much Tom. I'm with you in astral fascination! Are you thinking of the Pleiades on Orion's belt? This combinations of constellations is so beautiful on a winter night. It is for a contest. Happy stargazing. Over Fork Over!
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