Barbara Gorelick Poet Quintain (English)

One Spring Day

Winter withdraws its cloak from the hills
Quietly revealing this spring's newborn green
My tired heart  with sweet anticipation fills
The world seems somehow bright and clean
And nature's hope and promise again convene




Spring quintain contest
2/6/12

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Kim Merryman February 27, 2012 at 5:52 PM I love that first line - so descriptive. Congrats on your win, Barbara! Love, Kim

Iolanda Scripca February 27, 2012 at 5:03 PM You composed a great poem, dear Barbara ! Congratulations on your win. Let Spring come to you!!! :) Best, iolanda

Christopher Bunton February 27, 2012 at 11:32 AM Congratulations!

Carol Sunshine Brown February 26, 2012 at 5:27 PM Congratulations on your win in Francine's "English Quintain" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson February 26, 2012 at 5:26 PM Sweet anticipation of Spring. Congratulations on a fine piece Barbara. Love, Joyce.

Andrea Dietrich February 26, 2012 at 3:39 PM I just LOVE this one, Barbara. One of the shortest but also one of the sweetest on the list of winners. Congrats for your win. Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 26, 2012 at 1:59 PM congrats BG on a well deserved win for this beautiful write on Spring luv..

Francine Roberts February 25, 2012 at 11:12 PM congrats on your win in the contest Barbara

Anne-Lise Andresen February 8, 2012 at 10:52 AM I like your spring quintain Barbara,beautiful springtime!!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Kash Poet February 7, 2012 at 12:25 AM Very nice poem on advent of spring.Enjoyed the read.