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One Spring

Rain fell on me with wet kisses. Then
Sun’s ardor grew and made me blush
from his fiery caress.
I preferred the threesome:
You and I kissing
as Spring’s warm breeze
embraced the
two of
us.

Michael J. Falotico's
"Nonet Me A Spring Kiss"

For Brian Strand's
Any POEM with max 12 lines/any form/any theme

Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2011

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Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 10/29/2013 11:48:00 PM What a wonderful poem. And another great winner. Login to Reply

Pam Woolford Date: 2/26/2012 8:55:00 AM I loved this Andrea. Spring is my favourite month here in Australia because we have so many things happening. Calves, lambs and other baby animals usually come into the world at this time. Well done on first place. Love Pam. x Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 2/24/2012 9:58:00 AM I love the imagery in this, Andrea. I am thrilled to share the honor of 1st place with you. Congrats! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Maureen Lefanue Date: 2/23/2012 5:38:00 AM Congratulations, Andrea, on your win for this sweet poem. Love, Maureen Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 2/22/2012 7:17:00 AM romave of spring coms alive with this winner, andie... congrats big time!..:) huggs! Login to Reply

Margaret Foster Date: 2/22/2012 3:54:00 AM A spring romance that lives on. As ever great writing. Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 2/21/2012 7:41:00 PM Congrats Andrea...another awesome write with strong romantic sentiments. Congrats. Wooot!! Gwendolen Login to Reply

Christopher Bunton Date: 2/21/2012 3:44:00 PM Congratulations! :) Login to Reply

Lizanne Scholtz Date: 2/21/2012 1:50:00 PM Congratulations on your win, with this lovely nonet Andrea, love Elizabeth Login to Reply

Samual Ronthorpe Date: 2/21/2012 1:49:00 PM Wonderful images here, Andrea. I really enjoyed reading it. Congrats on placing on Brian's winners' list........................S.Ronthorpe Login to Reply

Ralph Taylor Date: 2/21/2012 11:49:00 AM Congrats, Andrea. Awesome, well deserved win. Beautiful. Enjoyed. Great job. Nice going. luv Ralph Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 2/21/2012 11:21:00 AM Yeah...you do so well with the topic of LOVE;)..Congrats on your 1st place win in Brian's contest. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 2/21/2012 11:13:00 AM You do so well with the topic of love ;) Congrad's Light & Love Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/21/2012 10:06:00 AM congrats Andrea on a super first place win luv for lovely words.. soup mail too.. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/21/2012 9:40:00 AM Congratulations on your placement in ~Brian Strand's~ "Any Poem with Max 12 Lines" contest *Andrea*. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Carol Eastman Date: 2/21/2012 8:26:00 AM Beautiful imagery. Congratulations on the win. Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 4/9/2011 8:23:00 PM i really loved this poem i can't pick out a favorite line, their all good. thank you for remembering Murphy and for reading Good bye Murphy. yes it is so hard to have them put to sleep. My daughter and I were in the same room with him. I held his paw as he died it tears me up as I type this. he was such a good dog, we knew what the other was thinking most of the time, it was so weird and i sure do miss him. Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 3/27/2011 9:13:00 AM What a very nice triple combination for spring you put in here, Andrea! Did this win? I sure hope so! hugs to you :) -- heehee I am giving myself another half hour here to do comments then I gotta go!! Login to Reply

Carol Fillmore Date: 3/25/2011 9:29:00 AM this is a very romantic one, Andrea...well written! Thanks for your comments on "What Easter Means to Me"...that He could be so generous in forgiving is something we should be aiming for...easier said than done for us, though;)) Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 3/25/2011 4:01:00 AM Revisited this little gem Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 3/21/2011 7:14:00 AM This one is just awesome Andrea, I am positive this one will be a winner ;) love Wilma Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 3/21/2011 6:03:00 AM Awesome entry, Andrea, love this theme, Harry Login to Reply

Robert Long Mellott Date: 3/20/2011 7:51:00 PM This is a very nicely wrought poem, Andrea. I admire how you fashioned the allegory of the promise that Spring makes in teasing our senses into anticipation of the warmth of Summer. Well done! Bob Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 3/20/2011 1:50:00 PM Loved this write Andrea. Good luck on the contest. love phyo Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 3/20/2011 9:02:00 AM One of the best ones I have read for Michael's contest Andrea. Good luck with this little gem, as it will be on the winners podium. * I am fine thx, living quiet presently. Enjoying my football, and writing the few poems I am posting. I trust all is well at your end. Have a lovely Sunday, hugs from Scotland....:) Login to Reply

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