One Single Bit

I clearly remember a beautiful summer day
As we were there listening to the music play
We were young, and in love, and we dared to break the rules
Why, cause it's just what teenagers sometimes do
We were just way too cool
There we were together caught within each others embraces
We kissed passionately, and your hand touched forbidden places
You then released me from your sweet kiss
Looked me in the eyes, and to me you said this
Shh...it's okay just let me try, if you don't like it I promise I'll stop, and I will not be mad one 
single bit
I will not break up with you, I will not cast you aside
I love you completely starting with the essence of you from the inside
Never had I quite been that far before
And yet you left me wanting you even more
This scared me right to the core
I knew in that moment I had nothing to fear
From the look within your eyes, I knew you were sincere
Not to long after that we did sadly say goodbye
It left you and I towards each other bitter, and often with a deep felt sigh
Time would pass and as fate would have it we met again
Then those pleasures from deep within the night that we then both had the wondrous win
But fate can sometimes play cruel and unusual games
We left each other yet again, yet neither one of us were truly to blame
It was just not meant to be in that time
But what I wouldn't have done to have made you mine
And now here we are in present day and I still see
You still have this remarkable control in everything within me
You have it over my heart, and my soul, it's so intense I just can't let how I feel be
Give me time and you could easily and willingly take me to my knees
Ready to do anything and everything you desire, whatever you please
But if and when I speak to you, my words always seem to get in my way
You are the one person with whom still takes my very breath away
The remembrances of being in your arms is where I want to stay
I would love to have my moment where it's you that I come to face
Not just saying my words but showing you what they mean and have us caught in each 
others embrace
Kissing you passionately, my hands touching possibly forbidden places
Then releasing you from my kiss
Looking you deep in the eyes and to you I say this
Shh...it's okay just let me try, if you don't like it I promise I'll stop, and I will not be mad one 
single bit
I will then walk away
With nothing more to say
Knowing that I showed you completely my love for you is here to stay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/29/2009 4:56:00 AM
A strong memory well captured. Sounds so much more than chemistry, which is a powerful thing within itself. Well, what is meant to be will be, and I only wish you all the best. Affairs of the heart can be so complicated. Good luck. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/28/2009 6:30:00 PM
This is beautifully written, so much passion and love is expressed in the deepest sense..It seems like this was Young love, although the deepest emotion remains, something kept the two of you apart..But forever the memories of what you shared will stay with you..If you truly feel so strongly, open yourself up and reveal what you've been afraid to...Finding someone that can turn you inside and out in a good sense is worth fighting for..I wish you all the best, Lovely write..God Bless*Tyesha
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