One Season's Displeasin'

Though I'm in the Fall of my Life I Spring into Summer Pipes frozen come Winter I call the plumber

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 9/3/2022 9:41:00 PM

I spring into summer, when it's over, it's a bummer :( Your poetry is so much fun to read! Better than a piece of chocolate cake, which right now is eyeing me from the kitchen counter. Thank goodness you have more Gershon poems I can read.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 7/27/2022 8:06:00 AM

A charming write filled with lots of truth. I say " I am in the last chapter of my life" but I will write on! LOL! :)Paulette

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/27/2022 6:17:00 PM

Definitely, Paulette: Write on. Then hang around for an epilogue, a postscript, a tribute to the author, etc...

Michael Tor

Date: 7/27/2022 1:10:00 AM

Ha ha liked this one Gershon. Great job...