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One Runaway Religion

Ignite the barren clay, I need some rare elements to tie a thread to the moon. Upstaging the sun. Not aspirational he was stripped to become radical like the dark blood of a white soul. Pentadactylous was losing the big toes under the burning skies of unmindful eyes. The system was collapsing. One premature innocence dies defore the guilt was proved, in the howling night of terror. He unrolls the thighs to show the stitched corn. The seeds step out to prove the adolescence of crime. Satish Verma

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Date: 5/5/2011 7:09:00 AM
* Ps. * sorry for typo its supposed to be * “Pentagon” * as the five fingertips reaching from ones palms *
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Date: 5/5/2011 7:04:00 AM
* “Pentadactylous” * the five points of the pentgon * this is the image which enters my thoughts * as reflect upon this somber lit poem * spoken in profound distinctive hues * although much grimmer than i truly believe the truth shall one find to one day be * yet still the same tis but * “Exceptional Poetry In Motion” * hugs and kisses * kisses and hugs * sarah
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Date: 5/5/2011 6:33:00 AM
What a beautiful morning I am enjoying reading poetry here at PoetrySoup. I am happy to see yours among those which I am able to read this morning Satish. May the sun shine down upon you and bring joy into your life today and always. Love, Carol
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