ONE REMEMBERED DAY

Torrents of emotion tumbling through the mind 
Heartbreak and acceptance sadly now entwined 
Catch the fading moments, filtered gold to grey 
One fantastic hour, One remembered day. 

See the concerned faces, lock them in your eyes 
Hear sad conversations, tend the silent sighs 
Soothe hearts with your comfort, bear the pain away 
One fantastic hour, One remembered day. 

Hold your dreams forever, never let them die 
Burnish them with passion, drive your resolve high 
Pound that haunted high road till it wends your way 
One fantastic hour, One remembered day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Hamilton Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 7:53 AM
love this well written write Louis you have talent keep writing Shadow x smile
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October 16, 2013 at 8:00 AM
Many thanks to you, Shadow, have a great week. That is an order by the way!
Brown Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 10:41 AM
I am sitting here reading some very amazing poems today Louis. I am glad yours was among them. Have a wonderful day full of love and joy. Love, Carol
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