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One Poetic Night

It was a cold and brisk February night I stepped outside To take a short stroll to the dumpster. The sky was clear, almost starless. Waves of muffled car engines Whispered by every now and again Just opposite the tree line Behind my abode. Parking lot and street lights Kept their nightly vigil assuring Safe passage to all who crossed Beneath their path. Late night flights flashed their lights As they begin final approach Like a beacon in the midnight sky. Randomly lit windows throughout The complex buildings keep Night owls company as Hours grow later. I smile as I bask in The night’s symphony Waves of muffled car engines Whispering every now and again. Hearing only my footsteps as they Echo between the walls The creaking of my door brings A rush of welcomed heat As it lovingly hugs me And I lock my door. In a final sigh of relaxation I kick off my shoes and retreat Back to my nightly comfort zone My couch, my drink and my pen On this cold and brisk poetic night. 3/2/20

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Date: 6/30/2020 10:41:00 PM
Ah, 'this cold and brisk poetic night' -- So appealing as I sit shirtless and clack away, even in the a/c, in this week of 90+ heat AND humidity in Chicago (too far from the lake, unfortunately). Stay cool, Juanita... And thanks for the refresher! Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 6/30/2020 8:16:00 PM
do you understand....how your words just reached this man....you just told a simple story....but in it, i see such Glory....it was The Light that kept you safe....while disposing the trash, how do you Define Faith.....much enjoyed juanita....;)
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Date: 3/30/2020 11:27:00 PM
Juanita, I know that creaking door..,I've felt that warmth. You put it to words here. James and the others are so right. -Richard
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Juanita Smalls
Date: 4/16/2020 12:21:00 PM
Thank you for your support and for reading Richard. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/22/2020 1:45:00 AM
Envisionment very descriptive as though we were standing right beside you we feel see your imagination depictions, can nights reality brilliant write so much detailing and insight Thanks for sharing James:D
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Juanita Smalls
Date: 3/28/2020 8:15:00 PM
Thank you for your support Mr. Lee. There's nothing like sharing a good feeling when it hits you!. Thanks for reading.
Date: 3/16/2020 2:59:00 AM
A well night spent for you dear, Well penned!
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Juanita Smalls
Date: 3/21/2020 7:45:00 PM
Thank you very much Rercy.
Date: 3/15/2020 11:30:00 AM
Great way to spend a February night, maybe even more so now, any night. Good work Juanita...
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Juanita Smalls
Date: 3/21/2020 7:44:00 PM
Thanks Charlie. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/6/2020 5:43:00 PM
I really love your descriptive narrative style here. In some ways, it reminds me of my own, when I write this way from time to time. A fave for me.
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Juanita Smalls
Date: 3/7/2020 7:37:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. From the moment I had stepped outside, the feeling hit me and the words started churning in my head. It was such a peaceful atmosphere, I couldn't help but write about it. Thanks for reading. Peace and blessings.

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