Notes About The Poem
Tenth Place
Unity Conscious Poetry Contest
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One People, One Love

A classroom of wonders of earth and space
Eons ago a few hundred, the human race
Mankind comes out of African Savannas of gold
One color, one people, a tale to unfold
And perhaps guided by one love 
The fertile land below the sky above
Quakes have not yet parted lands
Nor do the people yet part in bands                            
Souls in abundance, with patience await
To be born and make happen their fate
We wonderful humans now evolve
Spirits entering bodies, their resolve
It must have been heavenly at first
Enjoying, nature’s glory, fully immersed
Love and trust and little to fear
So far from despair and to Eden so near
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Gorelick Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 8:52 PM
A peaceful existence, great write and congratulations! Robert
Anaya Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 4:06 PM
Thank you, Robert for your kind words, and congratulations!
Kauffman Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 11:08 AM
Wonderfully written Anaya! I love your last line - "so far from despair and to Eden so near" and the punch each of your lines carries. Seems we were on the same page thinking about Eden as a place of conscious unity. Congratulations on your win. Blessings!
Anaya Avatar
September 25, 2022 at 4:06 PM
Thank you, Sam Kauffman for your kind words. Congratulations on yours!
Seeker Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 1:22 AM
~ guided by one love” congrats on your fine win, Anaya!
Anaya Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 8:32 AM
Unseeking Seeker, thank you, I am most honored, and shall enjoy my placement! Anaya
George Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 8:09 PM
Lovely concept and lovely presentation ! A place where men living as a single entity is not far from Eden ! Very great chance for a win, Anaya ! All the Best!
Anaya Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 8:29 AM
Thank you Valsa, I am honored!
Buhagiar Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 1:10 PM
Excellent composition on a slightly difficult subject
Anaya Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 3:20 PM
Thank you, ...Unity Consciousness is wishful thinking? Victor thank you for your visit, honored!
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