One People, One Love

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Tenth Place

Unity Conscious Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Unseeking Seeker

A classroom of wonders of earth and space Eons ago a few hundred, the human race Mankind comes out of African Savannas of gold One color, one people, a tale to unfold And perhaps guided by one love The fertile land below the sky above Quakes have not yet parted lands Nor do the people yet part in bands Souls in abundance, with patience await To be born and make happen their fate We wonderful humans now evolve Spirits entering bodies, their resolve It must have been heavenly at first Enjoying, nature’s glory, fully immersed Love and trust and little to fear So far from despair and to Eden so near

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Robert Gorelick

Date: 6/2/2022 8:52:00 PM

A peaceful existence, great write and congratulations! Robert

I Am Anaya
Date: 9/25/2022 4:06:00 PM

Thank you, Robert for your kind words, and congratulations!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/1/2022 11:08:00 AM

Wonderfully written Anaya! I love your last line - "so far from despair and to Eden so near" and the punch each of your lines carries. Seems we were on the same page thinking about Eden as a place of conscious unity. Congratulations on your win. Blessings!

I Am Anaya
Date: 9/25/2022 4:06:00 PM

Thank you, Sam Kauffman for your kind words. Congratulations on yours!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 6/1/2022 1:22:00 AM

~ guided by one love” congrats on your fine win, Anaya!

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/1/2022 8:32:00 AM

Unseeking Seeker, thank you, I am most honored, and shall enjoy my placement! Anaya

Valsa George

Date: 5/31/2022 8:09:00 PM

Lovely concept and lovely presentation ! A place where men living as a single entity is not far from Eden ! Very great chance for a win, Anaya ! All the Best!

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/1/2022 8:29:00 AM

Thank you Valsa, I am honored!

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 5/31/2022 1:10:00 PM

Excellent composition on a slightly difficult subject

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/31/2022 3:20:00 PM

Thank you, ...Unity Consciousness is wishful thinking? Victor thank you for your visit, honored!