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Ok, let's wax poetic… about Peter, my boyfriend of 4 years (time flies).

If I have him hooked, there's fragile evidence
a girl can be powerful and helpless
it's inconvenient

He's normal-fine, but to me, dangerously cute -
not like some fey, pretty boy - but too good to ignore -
and he carries himself with disheveled, boss confidence

We have no stilted conversations, we chatter away 
his opinions are flexible - and he lives without apology 

I think he secretly sees me as a long-form project
He's brought order to my emotional chaos,
and tempered my irreverent indifference

He knows my successes don’t soothe me

If he gives me gravitas, I give him sparkle and irony

His senseless adoration of me makes me self-conscious
and softens my insecurities - which multiply when untethered

He's a well of sun-bleached optimism and kept promises,
and he matters more to me than all of my other favorite things, 
like tech gadgets, oysters on the half-shell and icy, stirred martinis.

His allure has always existed outside of that last, ephemeral corruptive.
He’s the one I want, in the hushed stillness after the party.

I hope that our love is more than crushed ice that melts away
because when he consumes me, there'll be no crumbs left.
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Songs for this:
We Can't Stop (feat. Bea Miller) by Boyce Avenue
We Can't Stop by Scott Bradlee's Postmodern Jukebox
We Can't Stop X Where Is My Mind? (Live) by Miley Cyrus
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Conn Avatar
April 3, 2026 at 12:08 PM
I’m just content with being a fine piece of ass. =]
Conn Avatar
April 3, 2026 at 11:21 PM
Oh the stories I wish I could bore you with. =]
Vionet Avatar
April 3, 2026 at 6:22 PM
That must be very rewarding - for everyone. =]
Fallica Avatar
April 3, 2026 at 7:36 AM
Whoa! . just Whoa! / <3
Vionet Avatar
April 3, 2026 at 8:37 AM
Yea! Just Yea! =]
Theraven Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 10:23 PM
Hello Anais, Way with words.., and crumbs. An anthem to a generation that's left numb. Yet still I'm drawn. "It's our song, we can sing if we want to // It's my mouth, I can say what I want to // Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, eh" -Richard
Vionet Avatar
April 3, 2026 at 6:18 AM
That song has been stuck in my mind for days =]
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