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There's a bright Finger nail in the sky; I like to imagine The man in the moon Bit it off in a moment Of stress or perhaps He was befuddled By some beauty He saw down below, Because even if he is Amongst the stars He's all alone Wishing to be One of us; Human and flawed Because we are always Within reach Of making a connection; With one another, But we'll always Look up at the sky Wondering What it's like To be him...

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Date: 12/30/2012 8:28:00 AM
I love the premis. I would also love to see you work it a tiny bit more so it flows and maybe some line breaks to give me a chance to savor your awesome idea about the finger nail bitten off...BRILLIANT concept...just brilliant...God's anxiety. Man that so works for me. Or Man on the moon ...whatever works for you..Just a great great image
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