John Beam Poet Rhyme

One of Those Daisies

Awoke feeling weedy a little green 		                         Like I slept face on the ground                                                        You gotta know what I mean                         	                      Like I had been hiked on by a greyhound                                       but I am dandy lion hear me roar                                 	       I can do this I can make this work                                                         The surprize in my eyes a distant lawn mower                                 I am dandy lion hear me roar jeeerrk

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Andrea Dietrich August 26, 2011 at 10:38 PM what very cute play of words is in this little poem. And I see you won with this one too. Congratulations, man!

Carol Sunshine Brown August 22, 2011 at 4:05 PM Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Boisterous Comedy" contest John. Love, Carol John Beam August 22, 2011 at 11:13 PM thanks with love in Christ Jesus

Dr.Ram Mehta August 22, 2011 at 3:52 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, John John Beam August 23, 2011 at 1:42 AM congrats to you also

Joyce Johnson August 22, 2011 at 12:52 AM Congratulations on this dandy of a lion win. Joyce John Beam August 23, 2011 at 6:24 AM what's cooking, thanks and congrats to you, also on your win.

John Freeman August 21, 2011 at 9:51 PM Quite the catchy title, John. Congratulations on your cool poem's class. Agape, Moses John Beam August 22, 2011 at 10:47 PM thanks, John sorry about editing problem it did not look like that when I posted it

David Williams August 21, 2011 at 5:19 PM hey John congrats on your win David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 21, 2011 at 4:33 PM Congrats John on a fabulous win with this witty write luv.. enjoy.. John Beam August 23, 2011 at 6:39 AM thanks for kind words and congrats to you also