One of Those Daisies

Awoke feeling weedy a little green
Like I slept face on the ground
You gotta know what I mean
Like I had been hiked on by a greyhound
but I am dandy lion hear me roar
I can do this I can make this work
The surprize in my eyes a distant lawn mower
I am dandy lion hear me roar jeeerrk
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 8/26/2011 10:38:00 PM
what very cute play of words is in this little poem. And I see you won with this one too. Congratulations, man!
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Date: 8/22/2011 4:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Boisterous Comedy" contest John. Love, Carol
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John Beam
Date: 8/22/2011 11:13:00 PM
thanks with love in Christ Jesus
Date: 8/22/2011 3:52:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, John
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John Beam
Date: 8/23/2011 1:42:00 AM
congrats to you also
Date: 8/22/2011 12:52:00 AM
Congratulations on this dandy of a lion win. Joyce
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John Beam
Date: 8/23/2011 6:24:00 AM
what's cooking, thanks and congrats to you, also on your win.
Date: 8/21/2011 9:51:00 PM
Quite the catchy title, John. Congratulations on your cool poem's class. Agape, Moses
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John Beam
Date: 8/22/2011 10:47:00 PM
thanks, John sorry about editing problem it did not look like that when I posted it
Date: 8/21/2011 5:19:00 PM
hey John congrats on your win David
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Date: 8/21/2011 4:33:00 PM
Congrats John on a fabulous win with this witty write luv.. enjoy..
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John Beam
Date: 8/23/2011 6:39:00 AM
thanks for kind words and congrats to you also
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