One of the Chosen

Gallagher never expected a heavenly welcome
For he was not religious, nor spiritual.
He thought dead was well, 
Dead.

His death was unexpected, he was young,
Invincible, not anywhere near death
Until it came and got him
Two weeks past his twenty-second birthday

A loud angry horn blasted.
His eyes popped awake
In time to see the semi barreling down on his car
It might have been better if he had stayed asleep

He woke up in a field but felt exhausted 
So returned to his sleeping place.
Many angels surrounded him but he did not know it
He was unaware

When he was ready, he followed his instincts
Into a wilderness of a forest 
There were violets and mushrooms
The smells were heavenly

At the end of the walk someone took his hand
It was Jesus; this amazed him
I never believed, he said.
Yes, you always did, Jesus reminded him.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Bangalee Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 2:08 AM
AT THE END THE WALKING ON THE GREAT BLESSED PATH...........PLEASURE TO READ
Krutsinger Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 8:25 PM
Thank you my friend.
Duet Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 8:40 PM
What a lovely poem, Caren. The character in my new one goes to the opposite "place". Carole :D
Krutsinger Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 8:25 PM
I have to head over there Carole.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 6:35 PM
Somehow I love those last two lines...
Krutsinger Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 8:26 PM
They resonate in your soul my friend, as they resonated in mine.
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