One of the Chosen

Gallagher never expected a heavenly welcome
For he was not religious, nor spiritual.
He thought dead was well, 
Dead.

His death was unexpected, he was young,
Invincible, not anywhere near death
Until it came and got him
Two weeks past his twenty-second birthday

A loud angry horn blasted.
His eyes popped awake
In time to see the semi barreling down on his car
It might have been better if he had stayed asleep

He woke up in a field but felt exhausted 
So returned to his sleeping place.
Many angels surrounded him but he did not know it
He was unaware

When he was ready, he followed his instincts
Into a wilderness of a forest 
There were violets and mushrooms
The smells were heavenly

At the end of the walk someone took his hand
It was Jesus; this amazed him
I never believed, he said.
Yes, you always did, Jesus reminded him.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 6/19/2020 2:08:00 AM
AT THE END THE WALKING ON THE GREAT BLESSED PATH...........PLEASURE TO READ
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/19/2020 8:25:00 PM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 6/18/2020 8:40:00 PM
What a lovely poem, Caren. The character in my new one goes to the opposite "place". Carole :D
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/19/2020 8:25:00 PM
I have to head over there Carole.
Date: 6/18/2020 6:35:00 PM
Somehow I love those last two lines...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/19/2020 8:26:00 PM
They resonate in your soul my friend, as they resonated in mine.
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