One Night Stand

Their once was a girl in love
She knew he was sent from above
They danced, they sing they did everthing
But then he deflated in the tub
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Gondolf Avatar
December 19, 2017 at 12:43 PM
This is hilarious, Niketa, I got a good laugh out of it. John
Palmer Avatar
July 25, 2012 at 6:12 PM
hahaha great write love the humour Niketa
Mckenzie Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 4:22 AM
thanks glad you all liked it
Mehta Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 5:59 PM
A nice tragedy well penned with images, niketa
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 11:27 AM
Wow I am reading a lot of excellent poetry today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Niketa. Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 8:40 AM
lol, perfect, love it
Culverhouse Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 5:14 AM
funny...needed a laugh this am!
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