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One Night Stand

Their once was a girl in love She knew he was sent from above They danced, they sing they did everthing But then he deflated in the tub

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 12/19/2017 12:43:00 PM
This is hilarious, Niketa, I got a good laugh out of it. John
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Date: 7/25/2012 6:12:00 PM
hahaha great write love the humour Niketa
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Date: 8/31/2010 4:22:00 AM
thanks glad you all liked it
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Date: 8/30/2010 5:59:00 PM
A nice tragedy well penned with images, niketa
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Date: 8/30/2010 11:27:00 AM
Wow I am reading a lot of excellent poetry today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Niketa. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/30/2010 8:40:00 AM
lol, perfect, love it
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Date: 8/30/2010 5:14:00 AM
funny...needed a laugh this am!
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