Beautiful Scars Poet Tanka

One Nature Tanka

tender hues flourished
     peeked buds seek deep effloresce
lovely shades of ripe chartreuse
     pink celestial twilight drops
star d    *                 
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          t above morn's fresh dew
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One Nature Tanka
Sponsor: Rick Parise 

Date Written: August 1, 2016

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Probir Gupta August 8, 2016 at 6:05 AM Awesome ... Congratulations on your win ... Beautiful Scars August 8, 2016 at 6:36 AM thank you Probir :)-luloo

Paul Callus August 6, 2016 at 8:16 AM Hi Laura...your lovely descriptive words and creative stardust have turned this poem into winning material! Congratulations on a much deserved win:) Regards // paul Beautiful Scars August 6, 2016 at 10:17 AM many thanks sweet Paul! :)-luloo

Charlie Smith August 5, 2016 at 7:19 AM Congratulations on such a colorful write LuLoo... Beautiful Scars August 5, 2016 at 11:46 AM thank you sweet Charlie :)-luloo

Joanna Daniel August 5, 2016 at 12:34 AM Back to say congratulations on your win, Laura:) Beautiful Scars August 5, 2016 at 11:46 AM many thanks dear Jo :)-luloo

Sandra Haight August 4, 2016 at 10:32 PM Luloo, congratulations on your podium win. Lovely imagery in your nature Tanka. Hugs, Sandra Beautiful Scars August 5, 2016 at 11:46 AM thank you Lovely Sandra :)-luloo

Alexis Y. August 4, 2016 at 9:38 PM Hi Luloo, This is so beautiful and creative. Congratulations on your 3rd place. It was well deserved: -) Alexis Beautiful Scars August 5, 2016 at 11:45 AM thank you sweet Alexis :)-luloo

Anisha Dutta August 4, 2016 at 7:29 PM Put in so nice style. Congrats laura to enjoy star dust n win Beautiful Scars August 5, 2016 at 11:45 AM thank you lovely lady :)-luloo

Tom Arnone August 4, 2016 at 6:58 PM Lovely, artistic tanka, Laura. Interesting use of the word, effloresce (had to look it up). Congrats! :-) Beautiful Scars August 5, 2016 at 11:44 AM thank you Tom :)-luloo

Jan Allison August 4, 2016 at 6:53 PM many congrats LuLoo:-) hugs jan xx Beautiful Scars August 5, 2016 at 11:44 AM thank you lovely lady :)-luloo

Tim Smith August 4, 2016 at 6:00 PM Good to see this one up high on the list...congrats Beautiful Scars August 5, 2016 at 11:43 AM many thanks Tim :)-luloo

Laura Leiser August 4, 2016 at 5:41 PM Fantastic sentence structure and very creative, Laura :) Congrats on your win :) Beautiful Scars August 5, 2016 at 11:43 AM thank you lovely lady :)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2016 at 5:26 PM you let us SEE it with this awesome way of formatting it, Laura. Big congrats. Very well done. Beautiful Scars August 5, 2016 at 11:43 AM thank you lovely lady :)-luloo

Joanna Daniel August 2, 2016 at 2:09 AM Very nice tanka, Laura:) All the very best:) Beautiful Scars August 5, 2016 at 11:41 AM thank you sweet Jo :)-luloo

Tim Smith August 1, 2016 at 3:24 PM Well weaved Tankas..Good luck in the contest Beautiful Scars August 1, 2016 at 3:49 PM thank you Tim :)-luloo

Anne-Lise Andresen August 1, 2016 at 1:23 PM - A truly magical and beautiful poem, Laura - Luck in the contest .... a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Beautiful Scars August 1, 2016 at 1:26 PM Thank you Anne-Lise :)-luloo