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One Nature Tanka

tender hues flourished peeked buds seek deep effloresce lovely shades of ripe chartreuse pink celestial twilight drops star d * u * s * t above morn's fresh dew * * * * One Nature Tanka Sponsor: Rick Parise Date Written: August 1, 2016

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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/8/2016 6:05:00 AM
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Awesome ... Congratulations on your win ...
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/8/2016 6:36:00 AM
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thank you Probir :)-luloo
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Paul Callus
Date: 8/6/2016 8:16:00 AM
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Hi Laura...your lovely descriptive words and creative stardust have turned this poem into winning material! Congratulations on a much deserved win:) Regards // paul
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/6/2016 10:17:00 AM
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many thanks sweet Paul! :)-luloo
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/5/2016 7:19:00 AM
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Congratulations on such a colorful write LuLoo...
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/5/2016 11:46:00 AM
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thank you sweet Charlie :)-luloo
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 8/5/2016 12:34:00 AM
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Back to say congratulations on your win, Laura:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/5/2016 11:46:00 AM
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many thanks dear Jo :)-luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/4/2016 10:32:00 PM
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Luloo, congratulations on your podium win. Lovely imagery in your nature Tanka. Hugs, Sandra
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/5/2016 11:46:00 AM
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thank you Lovely Sandra :)-luloo
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Alexis Y.
Date: 8/4/2016 9:38:00 PM
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Hi Luloo, This is so beautiful and creative. Congratulations on your 3rd place. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/5/2016 11:45:00 AM
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thank you sweet Alexis :)-luloo
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 8/4/2016 7:29:00 PM
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Put in so nice style. Congrats laura to enjoy star dust n win
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/5/2016 11:45:00 AM
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thank you lovely lady :)-luloo
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Tom Arnone
Date: 8/4/2016 6:58:00 PM
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Lovely, artistic tanka, Laura. Interesting use of the word, effloresce (had to look it up). Congrats! :-)
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/5/2016 11:44:00 AM
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thank you Tom :)-luloo
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/4/2016 6:53:00 PM
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many congrats LuLoo:-) hugs jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/5/2016 11:44:00 AM
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thank you lovely lady :)-luloo
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/4/2016 6:00:00 PM
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Good to see this one up high on the list...congrats
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/5/2016 11:43:00 AM
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many thanks Tim :)-luloo
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/4/2016 5:41:00 PM
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Fantastic sentence structure and very creative, Laura :) Congrats on your win :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/5/2016 11:43:00 AM
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thank you lovely lady :)-luloo
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/4/2016 5:26:00 PM
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you let us SEE it with this awesome way of formatting it, Laura. Big congrats. Very well done.
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/5/2016 11:43:00 AM
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thank you lovely lady :)-luloo
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 8/2/2016 2:09:00 AM
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Very nice tanka, Laura:) All the very best:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/5/2016 11:41:00 AM
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thank you sweet Jo :)-luloo
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/1/2016 3:24:00 PM
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Well weaved Tankas..Good luck in the contest
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/1/2016 3:49:00 PM
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thank you Tim :)-luloo
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/1/2016 1:23:00 PM
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- A truly magical and beautiful poem, Laura - Luck in the contest .... a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/1/2016 1:26:00 PM
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Thank you Anne-Lise :)-luloo

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