Tim Smith Poet Free verse

One More Look

One final look,
 
one final glance

such deep brown eyes,

I'm in your trance.

Those full blush lips,

revealing that perfect smile.

I so need sleep,

but I think I'll dream awhile.

That radiant skin,

vibrant, glowing and flush.

An angel at my side,

so much more than a crush

As I close my weary eyes,

I know when I awake,

you'll be right there,

but first

one more look I'll take

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Maurice Yvonne November 11, 2014 at 7:19 PM You are such a charmer. Love this write. Tim Smith November 11, 2014 at 7:25 PM Thank you Maurice my good friend....I heard Jan's butt hurts :)

Paul Callus November 11, 2014 at 12:29 PM Hi Tim....this is beautiful and romantic, to say the least!! Free verse with timely touches of rhyme make this poem flow to the heart. a 7 rating, no doubt. // paul Tim Smith November 11, 2014 at 12:32 PM Thanks Paul I do appreciate it...cheers Tim

M. L. Kiser November 10, 2014 at 2:06 PM Beautiful and from the heart. You're quite the romantic. Tim Smith November 10, 2014 at 2:11 PM Thank you M L ...I do love romance

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 10, 2014 at 10:03 AM So sweet and romantic! I simply love it...she's a lucky lady. Love and Blessings, Rhonda Tim Smith November 10, 2014 at 2:10 PM I am lucky to have her...thanks Rhonda

Casarah Nance November 10, 2014 at 7:43 AM Oh that is cool. Your such a sweetie sweets. mwah Tim Smith November 10, 2014 at 2:09 PM Thanks Cas

Nette Onclaud November 10, 2014 at 6:08 AM oozing with sweet affection, tim... much enjoyed.. sigh!.. huggs Tim Smith November 10, 2014 at 2:10 PM Thanks nette...hugss

Brenda Meier-Hans November 9, 2014 at 6:25 PM Very beautiful Tim. I hope all your dreams come true. Tim Smith November 9, 2014 at 6:27 PM Thank you Brenda...hugs Tim

David Meade November 9, 2014 at 2:38 PM The warm skin of one you love next to you is a wonderful thing . . . nicely done Sir Tim. Tim Smith November 9, 2014 at 2:44 PM It is a great feeling to have the one you love at your side...cheers

Charmaine Chircop November 9, 2014 at 2:14 PM This is Soooooooooooooooo romantic!Extremely beautiful feeling!She must ve lucky to know someone is thinking of her constantly.Going to my favs! Charmaine Chircop November 9, 2014 at 2:24 PM I'm sure She is... Tim Smith November 9, 2014 at 2:17 PM Thanks Charma...I just hope she is thinking of me too...hugs Tim

Jan Allison November 9, 2014 at 2:04 PM oh how beautiful and romantic Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx Tim Smith November 9, 2014 at 2:10 PM Thanks Jan...hugs Tim