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One More Look

One final look, one final glance such deep brown eyes, I'm in your trance. Those full blush lips, revealing that perfect smile. I so need sleep, but I think I'll dream awhile. That radiant skin, vibrant, glowing and flush. An angel at my side, so much more than a crush As I close my weary eyes, I know when I awake, you'll be right there, but first one more look I'll take

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/11/2014 7:19:00 PM
You are such a charmer. Love this write.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/11/2014 7:25:00 PM
Thank you Maurice my good friend....I heard Jan's butt hurts :)
Date: 11/11/2014 12:29:00 PM
Hi Tim....this is beautiful and romantic, to say the least!! Free verse with timely touches of rhyme make this poem flow to the heart. a 7 rating, no doubt. // paul
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/11/2014 12:32:00 PM
Thanks Paul I do appreciate it...cheers Tim
Date: 11/10/2014 2:06:00 PM
Beautiful and from the heart. You're quite the romantic.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/10/2014 2:11:00 PM
Thank you M L ...I do love romance
Date: 11/10/2014 10:03:00 AM
So sweet and romantic! I simply love it...she's a lucky lady. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/10/2014 2:10:00 PM
I am lucky to have her...thanks Rhonda
Date: 11/10/2014 7:43:00 AM
Oh that is cool. Your such a sweetie sweets. mwah
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/10/2014 2:09:00 PM
Thanks Cas
Date: 11/10/2014 6:08:00 AM
oozing with sweet affection, tim... much enjoyed.. sigh!.. huggs
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/10/2014 2:10:00 PM
Thanks nette...hugss
Date: 11/9/2014 6:25:00 PM
Very beautiful Tim. I hope all your dreams come true.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/9/2014 6:27:00 PM
Thank you Brenda...hugs Tim
Date: 11/9/2014 2:38:00 PM
The warm skin of one you love next to you is a wonderful thing . . . nicely done Sir Tim.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/9/2014 2:44:00 PM
It is a great feeling to have the one you love at your side...cheers
Date: 11/9/2014 2:14:00 PM
This is Soooooooooooooooo romantic!Extremely beautiful feeling!She must ve lucky to know someone is thinking of her constantly.Going to my favs!
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/9/2014 2:24:00 PM
I'm sure She is...
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/9/2014 2:17:00 PM
Thanks Charma...I just hope she is thinking of me too...hugs Tim
Date: 11/9/2014 2:04:00 PM
oh how beautiful and romantic Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/9/2014 2:10:00 PM
Thanks Jan...hugs Tim

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