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One More Encounter

Falling in love with a stranger, an eye to eye encounter as autumn's winds oscillate maple's vibrant red foliage and horizon's hues foretell sun's imminent departure. A sketch on wispy pastures proposing a kiss of passion freezes your posture as moon peeks with compassion amid birds' winter migration silently urging your action for lovers' romantic collaboration. Like a frozen night in autumn you ache for sun's arrival, yet you never said hello, not even a second glance, sensing your blatant reticence she gracefully turns around. Like the barren trees of fall you stood your ground without a sound, immobile not even a parting smile. But feelings tug spirit having heard the lyrics of a beautiful festive melody: a cadence never ending, which love did recite but mortals couldn't write. Image etched ignites on fall's starry night a mosaic mat of fallen leaves spurring entire being to surrender to love urging you to emote when she comes calling for one more encounter drowning you in ecstasy even if it turns out to be a cold autumn breeze or rapture of a blessed plea earthly or celestial or just a beautiful dream. First Place Win September 21, 2017 Autumn Romance Sponsor: Julie Rodeheaver

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Date: 10/3/2017 5:00:00 AM
Vijay, a great write, and a well deserved win.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/3/2017 7:13:00 AM
Thank you Darren!
Date: 9/30/2017 11:38:00 AM
Wonderful write Vijay,one of your best, congratulation, well deserved...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/30/2017 12:27:00 PM
Thank you Charlie!
Date: 9/29/2017 7:01:00 PM
A beautiful 'autumn romance' poem, Vijay. Congratulations on your well-deserved 1st place win. Sandra
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/29/2017 9:11:00 PM
Thank you Sandra!
Date: 9/29/2017 6:33:00 PM
Vijay, a lovely write, congratulations on your high placement in the contest !
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/29/2017 6:39:00 PM
Thank you BW!
Date: 9/29/2017 3:46:00 PM
Masterfully created Vijay! Most deserving of your first placement! Congratulations! : )
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/29/2017 4:44:00 PM
Thank you Connie!
Date: 9/29/2017 8:25:00 AM
Moving and appealing piece, Vijay! Congrats! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/29/2017 4:43:00 PM
Thank you Janice!
Date: 9/29/2017 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations Vijay! :) Yay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/29/2017 4:43:00 PM
Thank you Heidi!
Date: 9/29/2017 5:59:00 AM
Big Congrats to win top. Bigger Congrats to write a long poem. I have little patience. Best Wishes
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/29/2017 6:43:00 AM
Many thanks Anisha for your lovely comments! Congrats to you as well!
Date: 9/29/2017 5:43:00 AM
A wonderful write, Vijay ... Congratulations on your fine win ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/29/2017 5:49:00 AM
Thank you Probir!
Date: 9/29/2017 12:43:00 AM
Congratulations, Vijay on your great win with a fabulous poem.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/29/2017 5:48:00 AM
Thank you Subimal!
Date: 9/28/2017 10:59:00 PM
Wonderfully refreshing and thoughtful perspective on the topic, and I enjoyed very much the way you wove this tapestry of romance, Vijay! Blessings and congrats on this well-deserved win, my friend! :-)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/29/2017 5:48:00 AM
Thank you Gregory!
Date: 9/22/2017 10:03:00 PM
This is wonderful Vijay! This will definitely do great in the contest.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/23/2017 5:17:00 AM
Thank you James for your lovely comments!
Date: 9/22/2017 12:34:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay. I appreciate your comment. 'One More Encounter'. What amazing imagination you have, and words to match.. Best wishes in contest.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/22/2017 6:10:00 AM
Thank you curtis for your delightful comments!
Date: 9/21/2017 8:31:00 PM
A very enchanting write Vijay...best wishes
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/21/2017 9:37:00 PM
Thank you Joseph!
Date: 9/21/2017 9:33:00 AM
Now, this poem is certainly romance written beautifully! I love the ending too. Well done and good luck in the contest! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/21/2017 9:44:00 AM
Thank you Heidi-- always a delight to read your feedback!
Date: 9/21/2017 8:42:00 AM
Excellent. Beautifully writen. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/21/2017 8:54:00 AM
Enjoy reading your comments Ravi--appreciate and value your feedback, always!
Date: 9/21/2017 7:44:00 AM
Your language, as captivating as maple's autumn foliage, proudly parades before the reader's eyes radiating love in every heart! Superb writing my friend, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/21/2017 8:54:00 AM
Such lovely expression of support from you makes my day, my friend--always love your visit!
Date: 9/21/2017 7:39:00 AM
This is lovely, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/21/2017 7:42:00 AM
Loved reading you comment--many thanks Kim!
Date: 9/21/2017 7:29:00 AM
WoW!!! awesome my friend...enjoyed every line, Vijay...beautifully written...god bless and a winner for sure...^WW^
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/21/2017 7:36:00 AM
Thank you WW for such lovely comments--Loved reading your poem this morning!
Date: 9/21/2017 6:55:00 AM
Have you ever been published? That last stanza is amazing.. A lucky man would have a woman like this, but yes, most of the time it is just a dream..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/21/2017 7:35:00 AM
Love your feedback Silent One--no I have never tried to publish--many thanks for asking--love your visit!
Date: 9/21/2017 5:35:00 AM
This is so beautiful, such a gorgeous write my friend! I am amazed by your skillfulness at writing such an elaborate poem! I am in awe by your tenderness and your graciousness within your incredible poem, What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
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