One More Encounter

Falling in love with a stranger,
an eye to eye encounter
as autumn's winds oscillate
maple's vibrant red foliage
and horizon's hues foretell
sun's imminent departure.

A sketch on wispy pastures
proposing a kiss of passion
freezes your posture
as moon peeks with compassion
amid birds' winter migration
silently urging your action 
for lovers' romantic collaboration.

Like a frozen night in autumn
you ache for sun's arrival,
yet you never said hello,
not even a second glance,
sensing your blatant reticence
she gracefully turns around.

Like the barren trees of fall
you stood your ground
without a sound, immobile
not even a parting smile.

But feelings tug spirit
having heard the lyrics
of a beautiful festive melody:
a cadence never ending,
which love did recite
but mortals couldn't write.

Image etched ignites
on fall's starry night
a mosaic mat of fallen leaves
spurring entire being
to surrender to love
urging you to emote
when she comes calling
for one more encounter
drowning you in ecstasy
even if it turns out to be
a cold autumn breeze
or rapture of a blessed plea 
earthly or celestial
or just a beautiful dream.

First Place Win
September 21, 2017
Autumn Romance
Sponsor: Julie Rodeheaver
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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White Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 5:00 AM
Vijay, a great write, and a well deserved win.
Pandit Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 7:13 AM
Thank you Darren!
Smith Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 11:38 AM
Wonderful write Vijay,one of your best, congratulation, well deserved...
Pandit Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 12:27 PM
Thank you Charlie!
Haight Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 7:01 PM
A beautiful 'autumn romance' poem, Vijay. Congratulations on your well-deserved 1st place win. Sandra
Pandit Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 9:11 PM
Thank you Sandra!
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September 29, 2017 at 6:33 PM
Vijay, a lovely write, congratulations on your high placement in the contest !
Pandit Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 6:39 PM
Thank you BW!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 3:46 PM
Masterfully created Vijay! Most deserving of your first placement! Congratulations! : )
Pandit Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 4:44 PM
Thank you Connie!
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September 29, 2017 at 8:25 AM
Moving and appealing piece, Vijay! Congrats! Janice
Pandit Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 4:43 PM
Thank you Janice!
Sands Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 8:22 AM
Congratulations Vijay! :) Yay!
Pandit Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 4:43 PM
Thank you Heidi!
Dutta Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 5:59 AM
Big Congrats to win top. Bigger Congrats to write a long poem. I have little patience. Best Wishes
Pandit Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 6:43 AM
Many thanks Anisha for your lovely comments! Congrats to you as well!
Gupta Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 5:43 AM
A wonderful write, Vijay ... Congratulations on your fine win ...
Pandit Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 5:49 AM
Thank you Probir!
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September 29, 2017 at 12:43 AM
Congratulations, Vijay on your great win with a fabulous poem.
Pandit Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 5:48 AM
Thank you Subimal!
Barden Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 10:59 PM
Wonderfully refreshing and thoughtful perspective on the topic, and I enjoyed very much the way you wove this tapestry of romance, Vijay! Blessings and congrats on this well-deserved win, my friend! :-)
Pandit Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 5:48 AM
Thank you Gregory!
Swartz Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 10:03 PM
This is wonderful Vijay! This will definitely do great in the contest.
Pandit Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 5:17 AM
Thank you James for your lovely comments!
Johnson Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 12:34 AM
Thank you, Vijay. I appreciate your comment. 'One More Encounter'. What amazing imagination you have, and words to match.. Best wishes in contest.
Pandit Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 6:10 AM
Thank you curtis for your delightful comments!
May Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 8:31 PM
A very enchanting write Vijay...best wishes
Pandit Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 9:37 PM
Thank you Joseph!
Sands Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 9:33 AM
Now, this poem is certainly romance written beautifully! I love the ending too. Well done and good luck in the contest! :)
Pandit Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 9:44 AM
Thank you Heidi-- always a delight to read your feedback!
Sathasivam Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 8:42 AM
Excellent. Beautifully writen. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Pandit Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 8:54 AM
Enjoy reading your comments Ravi--appreciate and value your feedback, always!
Trifiatis Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 7:44 AM
Your language, as captivating as maple's autumn foliage, proudly parades before the reader's eyes radiating love in every heart! Superb writing my friend, Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 8:54 AM
Such lovely expression of support from you makes my day, my friend--always love your visit!
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September 21, 2017 at 7:39 AM
This is lovely, Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 7:42 AM
Loved reading you comment--many thanks Kim!
Warrior Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 7:29 AM
WoW!!! awesome my friend...enjoyed every line, Vijay...beautifully written...god bless and a winner for sure...^WW^
Pandit Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 7:36 AM
Thank you WW for such lovely comments--Loved reading your poem this morning!
One Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 6:55 AM
Have you ever been published? That last stanza is amazing.. A lucky man would have a woman like this, but yes, most of the time it is just a dream..
Pandit Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 7:35 AM
Love your feedback Silent One--no I have never tried to publish--many thanks for asking--love your visit!
Sivey Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 5:35 AM
This is so beautiful, such a gorgeous write my friend! I am amazed by your skillfulness at writing such an elaborate poem! I am in awe by your tenderness and your graciousness within your incredible poem, What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
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