Mystic Rose Rose Poet Free verse

One Moment In Your Eyes

One moment in your eyes
and suddenly I find tranquility,      
again...
In a flash the memory returns
of who we used to be.
One threescore year and ten
each second is re-lived.  
In a single flash of smile,  
the world is ours again.
One moment you are in my presence,  
and the next we part like a last Amen!

It is your heart that keeps me young,
time and time again
time and time again
time and time again !

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Alesia Leach September 15, 2024 at 12:45 PM A beautiful love poem!!

Joseph P. DiMino September 13, 2024 at 7:43 PM The past is only the past if entirely forgotten. Fond memories go a long way -- like helping to producing such a lovely poem. Mystic Rose Rose September 14, 2024 at 3:43 AM so special to read your words, you always make my heart happy when you do Joe, have a blessed weekend !

Duke Beaufort September 13, 2024 at 3:05 PM Rose, How wonderful it is to think back. My goodness time goes by so quickly for us all. I am smiling at the thought that you can share such a touching feeling with all of us. My day is complete after reading this!!! Mystic Rose Rose September 13, 2024 at 4:35 PM Such a pleasure to receive such kind well thought out words Duke, may your weekend be full of inspired thoughts, and smiles of course !

Jay Narain September 13, 2024 at 10:11 AM A timeless love poem. Mystic Rose Rose September 13, 2024 at 4:34 PM Thank you Jay, always smiling when I see your comments, have a blessed weekend dear poet .

Ink Empress September 13, 2024 at 8:10 AM Awwn bless such love timeless and never getting cold! How blissful and heartfelt is this dear sweet rose! I love it! In times of hardships and many more in ones eyes we find serenity and warmth! Thats love! One that can calm everything! Pleasure reading this! Sending you light always! Mystic Rose Rose September 13, 2024 at 4:34 PM So glad you enjoyed the poem Ink, may you have a wonderful weekend filled with poetic diamonds, studded with verses that make the moon and sun smile alongside us, and you. :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers September 13, 2024 at 4:56 AM Dear Rose, Oh so romantic with wonderful images of an enduring love into our old age. What more could be asked for! A wonderful poem to kick off the weekend. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Mystic Rose Rose September 13, 2024 at 4:33 PM Romance is what keeps the heart mulched in softness, dear Daniel, thank you for reading, have a wonderful weekend :)