One, Many, All, Few

Alone---within myself,
I harbor myself and no other.
Proven by DNA and fingerprints,
even the likeness of my brother,
is different from me.  
As I from you
and you from he.  
One mind developed.
One soul enveloped,
one promise of eternity. 

Yet, within my life are many,
some close and some far away,
who influence the way I am,
the way I act from day to day,
in looks and speech
from lands afar 
not too far to reach
from there to here
in bygone year,
a new land ripe to breech.

I am all I will ever be?
Think again my friend.
I will change again, again
before coming to an end.
Three score and ten
maybe more, maybe less
only He knows when.
There will be other,
be it friend or brother
with me to mingle and blend.  

Yet, distinct in every concern,
my ideas, and thoughts pristine.
The lack of similar voiced opine,
makes me few and far between.
Also, consider all life at hand,
all things living everywhere.
By comparison, few are man.
Gods plan was good.
Man ruled as he should.
He rules simply because he can.

@  21 Dec 2010  Charles Henderson
     For Paula’s "I Am........ "contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 5:45 PM
Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "I Am...." contest Charles. Love, Carol
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December 27, 2010 at 12:13 AM
I sure remember this one and it truly deserved to be on the winners' list. Congratulations, Charles. Luv, Andrea
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December 26, 2010 at 5:47 PM
Congrats Charles on your winning poem in the I Am contest with this exciting entry my friend.. enjoy with luv and a Happy New Year too....
Mehta Avatar
December 26, 2010 at 10:22 AM
Many congrats Charles for bagging coveted spot in the contest with this thoughtful creation. Merry Christmas to you & your family. Luv/best wishes...Hitendra Mehta
Mehta Avatar
December 25, 2010 at 6:50 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Paula, Charles
Onclaud Avatar
December 25, 2010 at 5:26 PM
Sheer pleasure to read this, charles !! kudos for placing well in the contest..nette
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December 25, 2010 at 4:58 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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December 25, 2010 at 12:03 PM
Congrats Charles on your win!
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December 25, 2010 at 10:00 AM
I love the way your mind and heart work, Charles. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Merry Christmas, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
December 23, 2010 at 6:06 PM
Good luck in the contest ...Reads like a winner.. I especially like the last line..If only, mankind would do what he should..Your kind comments on my work "Dad The Last Snowflake" was very sympathic and understanding of the ideas that I wanted to convey..Sara
Wilson Avatar
December 22, 2010 at 10:03 PM
Really well written Charles..I am still working and striving to create mine..take care~Deb
Richards Avatar
December 22, 2010 at 7:20 AM
A self reflection seen with a keen eye! :) Well done, Charles. Happy Holidays to you and Carolyn!! :) Love, Carrie
Mehta Avatar
December 22, 2010 at 5:20 AM
very natural flow of the words with effective intellectual excercise, Charles, just lovely.
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December 22, 2010 at 5:19 AM
Charles, this is a thinking man's poem. I truly love it..I struggled with mine. I am way to literal I think..lol. BG
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December 21, 2010 at 11:51 PM
Love this Charles, good luck in contest, Harry
Dietrich Avatar
December 21, 2010 at 11:29 PM
charles, yes,I got that word right. You are pure eloquence! Way to go with this tricky challenge!! I sure wish I could sit down and try it out. But just no time! and thanks for your remarks on YOUR naughty words! I think what happened to you happens to many guys. LUv, Andrea
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December 21, 2010 at 10:43 PM
Outstanding!
Devonshire Avatar
December 21, 2010 at 8:40 PM
Brilliant and so meaningful, Charles. Possibly your best work ever. And believe me that says a lot.
Johnson Avatar
December 21, 2010 at 7:18 PM
Great work Charles. I am mullling this one over. I think you have written the winner. Love, joyce
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