One Man With a Poor Eye Vision

One man with a poor eye vision,
Decided to undergo circumcision.
But he perform it himself
And, of course, not too well,
From the start it was amiss decision
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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August 4, 2020 at 10:53 PM
Whew. Bet that was a cold cut!... Cute one, Alex. Cheers, Gershon
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August 5, 2020 at 1:21 AM
Thank you, Gershon! English is my second language, so I am afraid to write comments and write poems with the help of a translator, but every day it gets easier. So keep in touch. Alex
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