Line Gauthier Poet Tanka

One Look

one look and i knew
the attraction was fatal
infatuation
would grow into devotion
and i’d never find a cure
 


AP: 3rd place 2022

Submitted on May 19, 2021 for contest TANKA sponsored by M.L. KISER  -  RANKED 2ND

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Sara Kendrick June 7, 2021 at 5:10 AM Enjoyed reading this creative work. Way to go. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Andrea Dietrich June 4, 2021 at 5:21 PM wow, this is SO amazing. A fave for me!! Line Gauthier June 4, 2021 at 7:58 PM Thank you very much, Andrea ~

Kim Merryman June 4, 2021 at 4:36 PM Beautiful words and beautiful sentiment! Congrats on your win, Line! Blessings, Kim M Line Gauthier June 4, 2021 at 7:58 PM Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated ~

Eve Roper June 3, 2021 at 3:29 PM Congratulations on your win, Line , in M.L Tanka poetry contest. Enjoyed reading. My warmest wishes. God bless you. <3 Line Gauthier June 3, 2021 at 7:53 PM Thank you very much, Eve ~

Christuraj Alex June 3, 2021 at 10:05 AM Very Creative. Congratulations! Line Gauthier June 3, 2021 at 2:54 PM Thanks, Christuraj ~

Sam Kauffman June 3, 2021 at 9:43 AM So romantically creative Line! Love all the words that point us to "love sickness" that grows into a lifetime love. So well done. Congratulations on your win. Blessings! Line Gauthier June 3, 2021 at 2:54 PM Thank you very much, Sam ~

Timothy Mcguire July 16, 2018 at 11:01 PM Love at first sight is real! Line Gauthier July 17, 2018 at 5:25 AM For sure. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Timothy.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 10, 2018 at 11:08 AM - Lovely tanka, Line :) - Best wishes in the contest and hugs // Anne-Lise :) Line Gauthier July 10, 2018 at 12:57 PM Thank you, Sunshine. Most appreciated.

Lyric Man July 9, 2018 at 11:00 PM LG.. your romantic tanka rockd; every line an appealing winner! Line Gauthier July 10, 2018 at 6:24 AM Thank you so much, LM, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Mick Talbot July 9, 2018 at 4:10 PM Very nice, a winner for me! Mick Line Gauthier July 9, 2018 at 10:08 PM Thank you, Mick. Most appreciated.

Sylvia Coulstock July 9, 2018 at 4:08 PM Who would want a cure?I love this and everything it means.Thank you Line. Line Gauthier July 9, 2018 at 10:09 PM Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Sylvia. Most appreciated.