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One Liners Contest 2

White wings of a dove beat in time with my heart

Contest: One Liners – 2 contest
Sponsor: Silent One

5th December 2015

birdlovemonoku

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Tammy Reams

Date: 12/9/2015 6:14:00 PM

Wonderful write Jan! Congrats on your win!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/9/2015 6:40:00 PM

Thanks Tammy

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/8/2015 9:34:00 PM

This is quite lovely, Jan! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Jan Allison
Date: 12/9/2015 1:23:00 AM

Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/7/2015 6:56:00 AM

Congratulations Jan. Regards, Nayda.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2015 7:26:00 AM

Thanks Nayda:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/7/2015 12:53:00 AM

Very lovely Janet.. congrats on great win!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2015 1:09:00 AM

Many thanks Dr Sharma - please call me Jan:-) :-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 12/7/2015 12:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2015 1:07:00 AM

Many thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Len Gasun

Date: 12/6/2015 8:10:00 PM

Wow! This is so wonderful my dear friend, Jan. I love it! Many warm congrats as well on your win! Hugs and cheers! <3 Leonora

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2015 1:07:00 AM

Many thanks Leonora:-) hugs Jan xx

CayCay Jennings

Date: 12/6/2015 6:47:00 PM

Lovely - congratulations, lady ... CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2015 1:06:00 AM

Many thanks CayCay:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2015 6:22:00 PM

Congrats, JAn. looks like we share a third place this time. Soupmail. something funny.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2015 1:06:00 AM

Replied - thanks that was hilarious:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 12/6/2015 3:23:00 PM

Very nice, Jan, and a great fitting picture...congratulations.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/6/2015 3:39:00 PM

Thanks Lin:-) hugs jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/6/2015 2:51:00 PM

Nice image and feeling, Jan. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 12/6/2015 2:54:00 PM

Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 12/6/2015 2:43:00 PM

See, Jan, it did pass all the requirements:) Congratulations!!! hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 12/6/2015 2:44:00 PM

I'm delighted Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/6/2015 2:30:00 PM

- Congrats on your great "One Liners Two" image, Jan !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/6/2015 2:31:00 PM

Thanks so much Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 12/6/2015 2:25:00 PM

Jan, Congrats on your one liner TWO win. SKAT

Jan Allison
Date: 12/6/2015 2:26:00 PM

Thanks Skat:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 12/6/2015 11:21:00 AM

Lovely! A dove is still part of nature, so I expect that the judge will be lenient:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 12/6/2015 11:22:00 AM

He did mention birds on the contest page - maybe it is too lovely dovey but I have to go with my pen:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 12/6/2015 7:29:00 AM

aww... nice...sending you my thoughts, hugs.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/6/2015 9:07:00 AM

Thanks Cas we sure need a bit of sunshine to brighten our spirits and dry up the rain:-( hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/6/2015 5:58:00 AM

Love this one liner just gorgeous. I just posted a new poem too. Lots Of Love Armand

Jan Allison
Date: 12/6/2015 6:33:00 AM

Ohh will drop by - I've done a blog - got pics of the devastation we currently have here with the extreme weather we are experiencing:-( hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/5/2015 7:09:00 PM

this is really sweet, jan. I think it will do better in his contest than your last one!! (hmm, just thinking, it is about love....)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/5/2015 7:14:00 PM

Not sure if it will be accepted as nature but it is about a bird associated with love so i will chance it:-) hugs jan xx