One Leaf

Crinkled crimson form
Suspended it seems at first.
Meanders to earth

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Duncan Chappell

November 6, 2010 at 8:56 AM

like this peace again my friend

Brandee Augustus

September 24, 2010 at 1:30 PM

Really like your first line. I can definetely see your poem in my mind, which is always a good thing. Congratulations on your sixth place win!

John Freeman

September 12, 2010 at 2:20 PM

Congratulations(!) Cecil on your poem's success! Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 7, 2010 at 3:51 AM

Congratulations on your win Cecil in Rick Parise's contest "A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)". Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

September 6, 2010 at 4:35 PM

lovely, congrats on your win in the contest

Ray Dillard

September 6, 2010 at 12:16 PM

Congrats on this fine entry! RAY

Andrea Dietrich

September 6, 2010 at 10:55 AM

Meanders is such a great word for it, Cecil. Congrats on your big win. LUv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

September 6, 2010 at 4:12 AM

Cecil, congratulations on your win in Rick's contest :) Wilma

Connie Marcum Wong

September 5, 2010 at 10:02 PM

I love your imagery in this outstanding haidu Cecil. Congratualtions on your win.

Audrey Haick

September 5, 2010 at 7:47 PM

Congratulations on you 6th Place Win, Cecil!. Love the imagery. Peace, Audrey

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 5, 2010 at 6:57 PM

Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest, cecil

Iolanda Scripca

September 5, 2010 at 5:39 PM

Congratulations on this beautiful Haiku, dear Cecil. Love, iolanda

Ralph Taylor

September 5, 2010 at 5:31 PM

Congrats, Cecil. Nice going. Ralph

Joyce Johnson

September 5, 2010 at 5:11 PM

Very nice Cecil. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 5, 2010 at 5:05 PM

Congrats Cecil on your winning poem in Rick's contest... a lovely piece ..a lovely win .. enjoy tonight.. with luv..

Barbara Gorelick

September 5, 2010 at 4:59 PM

I love the word meander in your poem. congrats on your win. BG

Skat A

August 31, 2010 at 7:41 PM

Enjoyed your haiku~Skat

Andrea Dietrich

August 30, 2010 at 10:35 PM

I love that "meanders to earth" line. And very descriptive what you said of your leaf. LUv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 30, 2010 at 11:16 AM

Wow I am reading a lot of excellent poetry today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Cecil. Love, Carol