One Leaf

Crinkled crimson form
Suspended it seems at first.
Meanders to earth

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Duncan Chappell

Date: 11/6/2010 8:56:00 AM

like this peace again my friend

Brandee Augustus

Date: 9/24/2010 1:30:00 PM

Really like your first line. I can definetely see your poem in my mind, which is always a good thing. Congratulations on your sixth place win!

John Freeman

Date: 9/12/2010 2:20:00 PM

Congratulations(!) Cecil on your poem's success! Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/7/2010 3:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Cecil in Rick Parise's contest "A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)". Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/6/2010 4:35:00 PM

lovely, congrats on your win in the contest

Ray Dillard

Date: 9/6/2010 12:16:00 PM

Congrats on this fine entry! RAY

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2010 10:55:00 AM

Meanders is such a great word for it, Cecil. Congrats on your big win. LUv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/6/2010 4:12:00 AM

Cecil, congratulations on your win in Rick's contest :) Wilma

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/5/2010 10:02:00 PM

I love your imagery in this outstanding haidu Cecil. Congratualtions on your win.

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/5/2010 7:47:00 PM

Congratulations on you 6th Place Win, Cecil!. Love the imagery. Peace, Audrey

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/5/2010 6:57:00 PM

Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest, cecil

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 9/5/2010 5:39:00 PM

Congratulations on this beautiful Haiku, dear Cecil. Love, iolanda

Ralph Taylor

Date: 9/5/2010 5:31:00 PM

Congrats, Cecil. Nice going. Ralph

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/5/2010 5:11:00 PM

Very nice Cecil. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/5/2010 5:05:00 PM

Congrats Cecil on your winning poem in Rick's contest... a lovely piece ..a lovely win .. enjoy tonight.. with luv..

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/5/2010 4:59:00 PM

I love the word meander in your poem. congrats on your win. BG

Skat A

Date: 8/31/2010 7:41:00 PM

Enjoyed your haiku~Skat

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2010 10:35:00 PM

I love that "meanders to earth" line. And very descriptive what you said of your leaf. LUv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2010 11:16:00 AM

Wow I am reading a lot of excellent poetry today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Cecil. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/30/2010 3:04:00 AM

Brilliant haiku Cecil, best wishes for the contest