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One Last Rose

glanced at one last rose in my garden!           
                              deep crimson velvety petals - 
                     incandescent as luminous horizon at sunset,           
                      mystifying as the shadow of amber clouds 
                 glowing as the colour of my pulsating, fluttering heart ~ 
                   at the delightful thoughts of being with my beloved. 
          
                       
                 summer is leaving ~    
                              magical rose bush almost abandoned...  
                                              one last flower
                                      bursting with radiant hues, 
                                    still smiling a ravishing smile ~         
                                       last dance of a ballerina ~ 
                            a jubilant performance of a creative soul, 
                                before the curtain finally drops and 
                      the performer fades away with a departing bow.      
                  reminding the inevitability of separation, decay and death. 
                  

                                       It is alone and lonely...
                           swaying and twirling on a brittle branch 
                                  final witness of the rejoicing,          
                 I see the solitary beauty, bravely waiting to join its clan.....          
                       I will wait to see the resurgence of a new bud ~         
                                    I will wait, and not despair. 


                                   

               Edited From " Last Rose" (written on November 30, 2020)
                                         For "Rose" Contest
                                 Sponsor: Robert James Liquori
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Callus Avatar
March 22, 2022 at 1:21 PM
What a beautiful and touching poem, dear Mala! Beauty comes and goes, but there is hope: "the resurgence of a new bud". This poem goes to my Favs, my friend. ~ Warm regards // paul
George Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 9:28 PM
This is such a lovely poem, so unbeatable in the richness of images and the thoughts it emanates! A lone rose swaying on a brittle branch when the season of blooming is about to close ! Congratulations on your great win, Malabika !
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 24, 2021 at 6:10 AM
Thanks, Valsa. Appreciate your lovely comment.
Kauffman Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 1:35 PM
Mala, congratulations on your win! There are so many wonderfully articulated layers of images all built on the foundation of hope moving in grieving. Wonderfully crafted. Sending you blessings, a hug and much love dear friend!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 6:49 AM
Thanks, Sam. Your comments mean a lot to me.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 8:49 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful story/write and picture. Roses are leaving for now only to be back next year. Have a blessed day with your win...............
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 6:48 AM
Thanks, Paula. Appreciate your lovely comment.
Alex Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 7:55 AM
This is great work as well like others of yours. With a beautiful rose image. Congratulations!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 6:47 AM
Thanks, Christuraj. Really appreciate your comments.
Mcintosh Avatar
November 12, 2021 at 4:34 AM
So gorgeous. I love this. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 6:47 AM
Thanks, Gina. Appreciate your comments.
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