Bite Size Poetry Contest no.141 sponsored by Line Gauthier ~ April 2026
He asked to see the sunset one more time Before the vesper bells that evening chime. She opened wide the window facing West Then propped him up…his ultimate request; His eyes lit up then closed, and he lay still The fading sun withdrew behind the hill.
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