One Hell of a Ride

He sat on the train in deep contemplation.
Unfaithful to his wife; giving in to temptation.
For so many he had wronged; regret washing over.
Bruises on his children and wife, her makeup to cover.
Embezzlement, fraud and flat out stealing;
widows he had robbed through financial dealings.
He would go to counseling if that 's what it took.
Dote on his family, even read the "Good Book."
Pay back all those whom he had cheated.
Do his time, no matter, just forgiveness he needed.
He stopped the conductor and pleaded with such haste,
"I have to get off at the next stop." "I've no time to waste."
The conductor with a laugh and fire in his eyes, yelled,
" This is the "Long Black Train" son!" "The next stop is Hell!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nehls Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 1:38 PM
Well, Arlene . sounds like he earned his ticket and finally made it home. Very well written and a great ending. Enjoyed it, my friend.... Robert.
Smith Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 2:27 PM
thank you, Robert my friend! love the comment, earned his ticket. Hugs.. Arlene
Lindley Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 9:30 AM
Reminds me of the song by Josh Turner, Long Black Train. Loved the song and now love this your poem too. Sad but true, "too late" are very sad words indeed to hear.. BBBBravooo!!!!!!!
Smith Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 4:28 PM
Yes, Robert, my friend... Two of the saddest words. I would hope no one to wait too long... Hugs.. Arlene
Clark Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 6:18 AM
Another "winner" in penning this one, Arlene. It's a GREAT read! Jack C
Smith Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 7:16 AM
Thank you, buddy.. It always brightens my day to see you have stopped by!!.. Hugs, Arlene
Allison Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 5:18 PM
gosh what a rat I'm glad he gets his just desserts. hugs jan xx
Smith Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 6:50 AM
Thanks for reading and commenting, Jan!.. Guess he should have made amends a little earlier.. Hugs...Arlene
Smith Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 1:42 PM
Love it Arlene....I do not approve of any of the things this man has done...As a man we can only forgive and leave his fate to the man upstairs....hugs Tim
Smith Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 2:06 PM
Love the title...how fitting
Smith Avatar
June 20, 2014 at 2:02 PM
So happy to hear you aren't that type Tim.. I wouldn't have thought you were.. have witnessed it. I always said if a man gets stupid and starts hitting he dang well better not go to sleep in close proximity.. Never had a problem :-).. Anyone can change and be forgiven for anything... Just don't wait till you are on the train.. Hugs.. Arlene
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