One Hell of a Ride

He sat on the train in deep contemplation.
Unfaithful to his wife; giving in to temptation.
For so many he had wronged; regret washing over.
Bruises on his children and wife, her makeup to cover.
Embezzlement, fraud and flat out stealing;
widows he had robbed through financial dealings.
He would go to counseling if that 's what it took.
Dote on his family, even read the "Good Book."
Pay back all those whom he had cheated.
Do his time, no matter, just forgiveness he needed.
He stopped the conductor and pleaded with such haste,
"I have to get off at the next stop." "I've no time to waste."
The conductor with a laugh and fire in his eyes, yelled,
" This is the "Long Black Train" son!" "The next stop is Hell!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/13/2014 1:38:00 PM
Well, Arlene . sounds like he earned his ticket and finally made it home. Very well written and a great ending. Enjoyed it, my friend.... Robert.
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/13/2014 2:27:00 PM
thank you, Robert my friend! love the comment, earned his ticket. Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 6/24/2014 9:30:00 AM
Reminds me of the song by Josh Turner, Long Black Train. Loved the song and now love this your poem too. Sad but true, "too late" are very sad words indeed to hear.. BBBBravooo!!!!!!!
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Date: 6/24/2014 4:28:00 PM
Yes, Robert, my friend... Two of the saddest words. I would hope no one to wait too long... Hugs.. Arlene
Date: 6/23/2014 6:18:00 AM
Another "winner" in penning this one, Arlene. It's a GREAT read! Jack C
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/23/2014 7:16:00 AM
Thank you, buddy.. It always brightens my day to see you have stopped by!!.. Hugs, Arlene
Date: 6/20/2014 5:18:00 PM
gosh what a rat I'm glad he gets his just desserts. hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/21/2014 6:50:00 AM
Thanks for reading and commenting, Jan!.. Guess he should have made amends a little earlier.. Hugs...Arlene
Date: 6/20/2014 1:42:00 PM
Love it Arlene....I do not approve of any of the things this man has done...As a man we can only forgive and leave his fate to the man upstairs....hugs Tim
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/20/2014 2:06:00 PM
Love the title...how fitting
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Arlene Smith
Date: 6/20/2014 2:02:00 PM
So happy to hear you aren't that type Tim.. I wouldn't have thought you were.. have witnessed it. I always said if a man gets stupid and starts hitting he dang well better not go to sleep in close proximity.. Never had a problem :-).. Anyone can change and be forgiven for anything... Just don't wait till you are on the train.. Hugs.. Arlene
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