One Grey Hair

She sounded such a bonny lass;
so pretty, shapely and well bred.
(For sure, she was outside his class).
She'd be annoyed; she'd been misled.
He shook with fear;
the time was near...

He sighed and gazed into the glass.
'My word, I'm looking old,' he said.
He had a date but would he pass
for thirty-five? You liar, Fred!
He combed his hair
(just one hair there...)


for Constance's 'One Grey Hair' contest, 25th February 2018

as soon as I saw the contests's title, I just pictured a guy with one grey hair & nothing else on his head!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 3/12/2018 8:11:00 AM
Jack congratulations on your win in my contest with this delightful write
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Date: 3/11/2018 7:40:00 PM
So happy to be back with congrats on this most original poem. Well done, Jack.
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Date: 3/10/2018 1:40:00 AM
Funny! Better white that none in sight. I had fun reading this one. CayCay
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Date: 3/8/2018 3:54:00 PM
You tell it so well Jack, the imagery perfect.
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Date: 2/28/2018 11:11:00 AM
Great poem Jack, I'm grateful in that regard --- fifty years old, full head of hair, only a few hundred grays concealed 'neath my long mane! Funny story you wrote my friend;-)
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Date: 2/27/2018 5:41:00 PM
HA. One hair only. What a GREAT way to see it, Jack!!! I really enjoyed seeing this one today.
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Date: 2/27/2018 11:42:00 AM
Very witty, Jack :) He should know at his age that you can't deceive a woman all the time!! Regards // paul
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Date: 2/26/2018 8:21:00 PM
A witty and endearing poem Jack. I love where your lively and humorous imagination took your pen.., and us too! Enchanting!
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Date: 2/26/2018 4:39:00 PM
LOl...like where you went with this!
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Date: 2/26/2018 4:06:00 PM
Oh the ad with the poem is to get rid of unwanted hair lol lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/26/2018 4:04:00 PM
Ha ha ha great humour Jack, not even enough for a comb over Lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/25/2018 4:42:00 PM
ooo - we can't help but fear for that dear lass. Adorable poem, Jack.
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