One Grain Unseen

I stand as if one grain of sand among billions unseen
as the force of life's storms wash over me
with the same tantamount as this ocean
lashing out against the shore
battered, bloodied, ever changing
yet breathing with the same rhythm
as these waves coming in and out

I watch the horizon bleed
at nighttide as it swallows the sun whole
watching inquisitively at the beauty
with the same curiosity as a child's eyes
peering out for the first time
never questioning the grandeur
as the moon emerges
from the same depths
as the sinking sun

i wish upon a shooting star
clasp my hands on bended knee 
then pray as this salty spray reaches my lips
yet i cavil his existence in sorrow
as i kiss the lips of death

03/08/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 4/5/2020 9:16:00 AM
Beautifully penned Sandra. You are indeed a special talent! Ron
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Date: 4/4/2020 6:46:00 AM
Wonderfully written! I can feel the aroma of the ocean on this poem. Congrats, Sandra. Stay safe and God bless!
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Date: 3/21/2020 9:15:00 PM
cool!
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Date: 3/19/2020 11:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Sandra... Your write is a Masterpiece ! An exquisite gem that shines... Really enjoyed, dear friend.. Have a blesssed day!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 3/19/2020 12:44:00 PM
thank you so much Robertina for your kind words... glad you enjoyed this one... hugs and blessings
Date: 3/17/2020 10:22:00 AM
This seals the deal for me - there's no doubt writing is what you were born to do, among other loving accomplishments. You are a word painter and I, an admirer. Hope you're not bus driving - oh, surely school is closed, got concerned for a moment. Love reading you. Hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 3/18/2020 6:27:00 PM
what a kind thing to say....schools are closed, I am frightened of this virus going around....prayers we all stay safe... hugs and blessings
Date: 3/15/2020 12:27:00 PM
Sandra, The wonder of that one special grain. The sun can't shine on all of them, all of the time. Children and crabs dig them. -Richard
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Date: 3/17/2020 9:54:00 AM
thank you so much Richard... no the sun can't reach them all at the same time... some shine while others remain in the shadows... hugs
Date: 3/14/2020 6:36:00 PM
Congratulations, Sandra!
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Date: 3/17/2020 9:53:00 AM
thank you so much Jack... hugs
Date: 3/14/2020 5:18:00 PM
Great imagery, Sandra! Congrats!
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Date: 3/17/2020 9:52:00 AM
thank you Kim...my muse poked through a little for this one... hugs
Date: 3/13/2020 11:55:00 PM
Congratulations on an awesome win Sandy- you are so right we are but a grain of sand on the beach, in the world in fact - you bring it so vividly to our attention as you also do the salty sea spray reaching your lips. Kudos my friend. Blessings Jennifer
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Date: 3/17/2020 9:52:00 AM
thank you so much Jennifer...I was pleased with the win since my muse has been hard to find these days... hugs and blessings
Date: 3/13/2020 3:55:00 AM
Nice one Sandra. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/17/2020 9:51:00 AM
thank you so much Krish… hugs
Date: 3/11/2020 3:50:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this beautifully sad poem Sandy
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Date: 3/11/2020 6:31:00 PM
Thank you so much Chris :) hugs
Date: 3/11/2020 7:57:00 AM
Fantastic engaging write Sandra. Could taste the salt. Congratulations for your win! xomo :),
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Date: 3/11/2020 6:31:00 PM
Thank you so much Maureen... hugs
Date: 3/10/2020 12:42:00 PM
Interesting personification. Great imagery.
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Date: 3/11/2020 6:30:00 PM
thank you so much Juliet :) hugs
Date: 3/9/2020 6:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Enjoy your win and day........
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Date: 3/9/2020 7:10:00 PM
Thank you so much:) hugs
Date: 3/9/2020 4:43:00 PM
Back to congratulate for your wonderful double win today!
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Date: 3/9/2020 7:10:00 PM
Thank you so much :) hugs
Date: 3/9/2020 4:21:00 PM
Really striking imagery, my friend - "as I kiss the lips of death." Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 3/9/2020 7:12:00 PM
Thank you so much Sam :) hugs
Date: 3/9/2020 3:20:00 PM
- Love how you describe these feelings in this wonderful poem, Sandra ... to see with a child's curiosity ... we should do it often :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/9/2020 7:12:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise :) hugs
Date: 3/9/2020 2:19:00 PM
A verse tinged with sadness Sandra and you realise how small and insignificent you are in the big scheme of things. Hope you're well. Tom.
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Date: 3/9/2020 7:13:00 PM
Thank you Tom : ) hugs
Date: 3/9/2020 12:02:00 PM
Salty spray reaches your lips and you cavil his existence in sorrow. WOW!
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Date: 3/9/2020 7:13:00 PM
Thank you Kim :) hugs
Date: 3/9/2020 11:33:00 AM
Sandra, great to see you back after a week off, hope you have been well. Another wistful write with the celestial and maritime images on your palette as you paint an existential masterpiece. What a talent you have and share. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 3/9/2020 7:14:00 PM
Thank you John for your Kind words :) hugs
Date: 3/9/2020 7:31:00 AM
The sadness in this poem touches me to my core. I can feel this as I read it, tears well up and the words find their way to my heart. So very deep and sad Sandy.
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Date: 3/9/2020 7:15:00 PM
Thank you so much Chris :) hugs
Date: 3/9/2020 6:58:00 AM
When one reaches the depths of his/her soul there discovers one's true self! Powerful poem dearest, Sandra! Hugs xxx
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Date: 3/9/2020 7:15:00 PM
Thank you dear Demetrios :) hugs
Date: 3/8/2020 9:05:00 PM
I love the dark depth of your emotional imagery, Sandy. Beautifully moving melancholy. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/9/2020 7:16:00 PM
Thank you so very much Susan :) hugs
Date: 3/8/2020 7:22:00 PM
You are blessed with the depth of thought dear poet, not all who write poetry are
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Date: 3/8/2020 7:23:00 PM
what a kind thing to say, thank you Frederic... hugs
Date: 3/8/2020 4:03:00 PM
Such imagery. A wonderful piece. We all have a cross to bare. Have a great day my friend.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 3/8/2020 7:23:00 PM
thank you so much my friend.... hugs
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