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One Good Neighbor

He came night after night. I don’t know how long he favored me in such an appreciative manner, but I was most pleased when I realized it. We had moved back into a property that had been rented out for nearly fifteen years. The clean-up was one tough job because the backyard was filled with more than a few of 'this, that, or the other' that had to be trashed. So, when my neighborly friend was spotted patrolling my yard one night, I was more than elated and grateful to see him. He took the same route each night, and we did make eye contact. But I purposely refused to formally meet him, because I did not want to become close to him. So, I never bothered to offer him food or drink. For reasons I will never know, he ceased to make his rounds. During the tenure of that treasured neighbor, the rodents disappeared. But I’m very disappointed with myself for keeping a wall between us. He deserved better. Sometimes I feel sad because comparatively, I gave him so little. But I must say that I have always been very appreciative of the kindness he shared with me. I shall never forget the dedication with which the neighborly cat donated his time and served me so faithfully. 4thPSCtest061821

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Date: 7/7/2021 11:42:00 AM
A. surprise but so true. loved it.
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 7/7/2021 10:43:00 PM
Thank you, Linda.
Date: 7/6/2021 2:20:00 PM
Wonderful, sweet and sad story Curtis. Love the image of your feline guardian donating his time. Wonderfully crated! Congratulations!
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 7/6/2021 5:08:00 PM
Thank you, Sam. I am deeply appreciative of your comments on a poem that means so much to me personally.
Date: 7/5/2021 6:44:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... with "surprising ending" expressing your "poetic humor." God bless you.
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 7/5/2021 8:58:00 AM
Thank you, Beata.
Date: 7/4/2021 8:56:00 AM
wow, what a great story, Curtis. Big congrats on your win
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 7/5/2021 8:57:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea.
Date: 7/3/2021 9:07:00 AM
Curtis, Great story and surprise ending. I think many of us have that neighborly cat roaming around. Congratulations on your win! All the best...Charlie
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 7/3/2021 9:41:00 AM
Thanks, Charles, for your comment and for the opportunity. Blessings.
Date: 2/13/2021 8:42:00 PM
A pleasure to find your charming poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Curtis ~ great twist
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 6/18/2021 2:11:00 PM
Thank you, my friend.
Date: 11/13/2018 1:06:00 PM
Curtis, sometimes I pass right by things without 'seeing' them. Your poem here and its ultimate win is one of those things. So I want this late response to carry as much weight as if it had been made the day this was originally posted. Congratulations, my friend!
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 7/3/2021 9:44:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Blessings
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 7/3/2021 9:43:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Blessings.
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 6/18/2021 2:12:00 PM
Thank you, Curtis, for your kind comments.
Date: 10/10/2018 8:13:00 AM
How sweet. Love the surprise turn. Congrats on your well deserved win, Curtis.
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 6/18/2021 2:13:00 PM
Thank you kindly.
Date: 10/9/2018 2:53:00 PM
Love the 'twist' at the end, made me smile, thanks for submitting it to my contest!
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 6/18/2021 2:14:00 PM
Thank you Michelle

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