One Good Neighbor

He came night after night.
I don’t know how long he favored me
in such an appreciative manner, but I
was most pleased when I realized it.                     

We had moved back into a property
that had been rented out for nearly fifteen years.
The clean-up was one tough job because the backyard
was filled with more than a few of 'this, that, or the other'
that had to be trashed.  So, when my neighborly friend
was spotted patrolling my yard one night, I was more
than elated and grateful to see him.

He took the same route each night,
and we did make eye contact.  But I purposely refused
to formally meet him, because I did not want to become
close to him.  So, I never bothered to offer him food or drink.

For reasons I will never know, he ceased to make his rounds.
During the tenure of that treasured neighbor, the rodents
disappeared.  But I’m very disappointed with myself for
keeping a wall between us. He deserved better.                                               

Sometimes I feel sad because comparatively, I gave him so little. 
But I must say that I have always been very appreciative of
the kindness he shared with me. I shall never forget the
dedication with which the neighborly cat donated his time
and served me so faithfully.

4thPSCtest061821
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Milgate Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 11:42 AM
A. surprise but so true. loved it.
Johnson Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 10:43 PM
Thank you, Linda.
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July 6, 2021 at 2:20 PM
Wonderful, sweet and sad story Curtis. Love the image of your feline guardian donating his time. Wonderfully crated! Congratulations!
Johnson Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 5:08 PM
Thank you, Sam. I am deeply appreciative of your comments on a poem that means so much to me personally.
Agustin Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 6:44 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... with "surprising ending" expressing your "poetic humor." God bless you.
Johnson Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 8:58 AM
Thank you, Beata.
Dietrich Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 8:56 AM
wow, what a great story, Curtis. Big congrats on your win
Johnson Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 8:57 AM
Thank you, Andrea.
Messina Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 9:07 AM
Curtis, Great story and surprise ending. I think many of us have that neighborly cat roaming around. Congratulations on your win! All the best...Charlie
Johnson Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 9:41 AM
Thanks, Charles, for your comment and for the opportunity. Blessings.
Gauthier Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 8:42 PM
A pleasure to find your charming poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Curtis ~ great twist
Johnson Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 2:11 PM
Thank you, my friend.
Moorman Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 1:06 PM
Curtis, sometimes I pass right by things without 'seeing' them. Your poem here and its ultimate win is one of those things. So I want this late response to carry as much weight as if it had been made the day this was originally posted. Congratulations, my friend!
Johnson Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 9:44 AM
Thank you my friend. Blessings
Johnson Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 9:43 AM
Thank you my friend. Blessings.
Johnson Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 2:12 PM
Thank you, Curtis, for your kind comments.
Gauthier Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 8:13 AM
How sweet. Love the surprise turn. Congrats on your well deserved win, Curtis.
Johnson Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 2:13 PM
Thank you kindly.
Faulkner Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 2:53 PM
Love the 'twist' at the end, made me smile, thanks for submitting it to my contest!
Johnson Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 2:14 PM
Thank you Michelle
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