One Freak Fell

I ran toward him with flowing hair
    He ran toward me hirsute

  With outstretched arms we sought embrace
    ~ He tripped, I played my flute
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 8:43 PM
LOL! Can’t stop laughing!
Wolf Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 7:51 PM
Hope you've gotten over my 'random humor' by now.
Ligon Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 7:15 PM
LOL, you are so random.
Wolf Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 7:47 PM
And so is my flute-a-phone! (Made of pure white plastic).
Romios Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 11:29 AM
Hysterical.. Gershon! I could imagine the entire scene! This deserves a FAVE because of itsoriginality, vocabulary and theme! Also, it’s quite visual and your humor is extraordinary-hardly, common!, Great hon! Pangie
Wolf Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 12:26 PM
Gosh. Thank you for the raw enthusiasm on this one, Pangie. Much appreciated!! ~ gw
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