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One Flesh

violent power seduces within moments equipping assurance, swirling senses of embrace, separating circumstances confusing the present. our bodies succumbed-motionless form clouds above, trembles of loneliness. outpouring rivers of wine, her innocence, my softness aching squalls of temptation, tender flesh discloses nature behind fine-combed meadows parting our conscious, consuming lavender harlot kisses. bearing our weight-drumming, steady-cadence-of- passion. numbing spilled breath heavy as saturating coastal fog. peacefulness of sleep, caresses shivers across my legs, whirlwind tremors begin tensing her thighs, (a suffocating serpent) imprisoned between heavens softness of touch, across abdomens. for a moment, shivering, exposed true nature, life becoming no parenthesis, bodies wrapped in weightless vertigo-

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/19/2010 3:10:00 PM
This is an excellent poem. It flow very well and displays passion in the images. I like the expressiveness and descriptiveness of the piece. Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/18/2010 11:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Jason. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2010 1:13:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 6/14/2010 12:53:00 PM
This is a wonderful piece, a well deserved feature! Accept my colorful congrats. Keep your pens dancing to the drumbeat of your passion. You are such a wonderful poet. With love, Adeleke
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Date: 6/13/2010 7:17:00 PM
Congrats Jason on the featuring of "One Flesh." Vince
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Date: 3/3/2009 1:51:00 PM
Wow! Love the images, Janson. "Bodies wrapped in weightless vertigo" is such a beautiful way to describe love. Here's my best to you! Carolyn
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Date: 2/14/2009 6:17:00 AM
congrats on your win!! surely was brilliant!! ~ Arany
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Date: 2/14/2009 2:30:00 AM
Jason. Congratulations on your win in Ms. Reynold's contest! An awesome and tight-knit write. Peace always, John
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Date: 2/13/2009 1:34:00 PM
Congrats on this win brother..Your talent is on fire.
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Date: 2/13/2009 9:22:00 AM
Jason, completely awesome writing! Congrats on your well deserved 2nd place Win in Kristin's contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 2/12/2009 7:37:00 PM
Jason, this is a scorching piece of FIRE! Well done, and congratulations on your second place win in the contest. Donna G.
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Date: 2/12/2009 6:24:00 PM
As Kristin said so simply...this one was hot, an excellent winner in the Love me Tender contest! Well deserved congratulations!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/12/2009 6:03:00 PM
Congratulations on placing in Kristin's contest - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/12/2009 5:32:00 PM
hmmmmmmm
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