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One Fine Day

ONE FINE DAY
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one fine day

middle of the morrow

two lovers fell out

had a quarrel


O their sadness

O their sorrow

Kissed, made up

Babies followed

Copyright © Mick Talbot | Year Posted 2018

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February 2, 2018 at 10:11 AM

Best part of a quarrel is the making up, oh and babies are a bonus. Regards Tom

February 2, 2018 at 4:12 PM

Been there, done it, read the book, lost the video. Haha, best wishes... Mick

February 2, 2018 at 6:42 AM

Togetherness so much better than the quarrel! :)

February 2, 2018 at 8:04 AM

Always, to cry with happiness when all ends well. after many a film, bet you have as well? ;-)

February 2, 2018 at 6:20 AM

You did this very well, makes me laugh the name of this form..

February 2, 2018 at 11:28 AM

Indeed a great compliment coming from you Silent! Strange name for a form?

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